This was wonderful!!!! I just loved it. I think my favorite part of the story was that Faith was always under suspision or being watched. She paid her debt, and everyone was able to just get over it. So, yeah, well done to you!
Comments from author:
Woohoo! I love reading reviews like that. I know it would be hard, but when I look at all the second chances the Scoobies have given people, I have to think they would eventually start looking at Faith's efforts and accomplishments, not just her past. (and man, that was a lot of commas). Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [ScreamingFlamingos] • Date [9 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This was a very nice little story. I liked the relationship that Xander, Faith and Willow had with each other. The moments that each had with the Serenity crew were thoughtful and sweet.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I liked working out how the three might feel about each other. I'm not good with angst, but I can do sweet. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Review By [saberson] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Totally not what I was expecting but fabulous all the same. Loved the interaction between the two verses. And the line "Faith and Willow were walking down the corridor when Jayne jumped them." made me giggle far too much. Thanks for the quick Firefly fix!
Comments from author:
Yes, if the evil corporate world is going to take our Firefly, we have to get a fix wherever we can! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
This is just a wonderful story. The characterization was perfect, the relationships rang true, and your dialog was delightful. I'm just sorry your story was so short. Sigh.
Comments from author:
Thanks a lot! I actually thought this was pretty long for a fic-a-thon entry, but it makes me feel great that you wanted more.
Now for the nitpick. *grin* You said that they would explore while trying to figure out how to get home. You covered everything but how they figured it out.
Comments from author:
Oh no! You have uncovered my dark secret. :o) I know, I totally skipped over the plot for this story. I thought about trying to rectify it, but I needed to get it in for the fic-a-thon. Maybe I'll work on an edit in the future. Thanks for reviewing!
