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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Nice.

I don't care that you jumped over Willow figuring out how to get home. Who cares! It was fun. I could totally hear Jayne whining at Faith and Willow that he wasn't gonna hurt nobody... How long did he stay stuck, anyway?
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm thinking Jayne was stuck up on that wall for at least a couple of hours. In my head, I see the girls sauntering past him every so often, taunting him. It would be a bonding experience for them :o)
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [11 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ScreamingFlamingos
Review:
This was wonderful!!!! I just loved it. I think my favorite part of the story was that Faith was always under suspision or being watched. She paid her debt, and everyone was able to just get over it. So, yeah, well done to you!
Comments from author:
Woohoo! I love reading reviews like that. I know it would be hard, but when I look at all the second chances the Scoobies have given people, I have to think they would eventually start looking at Faith's efforts and accomplishments, not just her past. (and man, that was a lot of commas). Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [ScreamingFlamingos] • Date [9 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LMiC
Review:
Loved it. A lot.
Comments from author:
That makes me so happy to hear! (or read, whatever)
Review By [LMiC] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from saberson
Review:
This was a very nice little story. I liked the relationship that Xander, Faith and Willow had with each other. The moments that each had with the Serenity crew were thoughtful and sweet.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I liked working out how the three might feel about each other. I'm not good with angst, but I can do sweet. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Review By [saberson] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Erica
Review:
This was very good, I always liked this trio together.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I had fun writing them.
Review By [Erica] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bill
Review:
Very well done!
Comments from author:
That's nice of you to say. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Bill] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sadie
Review:
Totally not what I was expecting but fabulous all the same. Loved the interaction between the two verses. And the line "Faith and Willow were walking down the corridor when Jayne jumped them." made me giggle far too much.
Thanks for the quick Firefly fix!
Comments from author:
Yes, if the evil corporate world is going to take our Firefly, we have to get a fix wherever we can! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Sadie] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
very cool
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and saying so!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rob
Review:
Great job, very well done.

Rob
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I appreciate it!
Review By [Rob] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
This is just a wonderful story. The characterization was perfect, the relationships rang true, and your dialog was delightful. I'm just sorry your story was so short. Sigh.
Comments from author:
Thanks a lot! I actually thought this was pretty long for a fic-a-thon entry, but it makes me feel great that you wanted more.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cwolf
Review:
I liked it.

Now for the nitpick. *grin* You said that they would explore while trying to figure out how to get home. You covered everything but how they figured it out.
Comments from author:
Oh no! You have uncovered my dark secret. :o) I know, I totally skipped over the plot for this story. I thought about trying to rectify it, but I needed to get it in for the fic-a-thon. Maybe I'll work on an edit in the future. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [cwolf] • Date [6 Aug 06] • Not Rated
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