Review of chapter "Chapter One: Baubles and Bangles and Beads" from Valkyrie
Only one thing to say: finally, something new. Keep it going.
Comments from author:
That is the plan. I have the next chapter roughed out; it looks, however, as though I might've experienced a glitch, because the story reads at the end as 'complete', which is certainly is *not*. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Valkyrie
] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Not Rated