Nice work. So far everyone is firmly in character and well written. The meeting of the groups should be fun to read, thus I hope I will get to read it soon. Chaja
Comments from author:
Yup, meeting of the groups comes next chapter. Hope to have it up reasonably soon. Thanks for reading and the feedback!
Review By [chajalive] • Date [20 Aug 06] • Not Rated
hehe....good point. their names are pretty stupid. lol. you WASH in a RIVER, then read a BOOK...i got nothing on inara. very good story, liking the whole xander bashing, not that i dont like xander, i just think its funny when he gets picked on...hehehe.
please update soon
Comments from author:
Hee. The names on Buffy were always pretty unrealistic too. I mean, when was the last time you met a teenager named Cordelia? Thanks for reading!
Review By [Jellylegs] • Date [20 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Interesting start. I have no idea of where you are going with your story, but you did a nice job with the characters and the Serenity slang so I want more story. Please?
Comments from author:
Thanks! I hope to post more in a pretty timely fashion. You have caught on to my secret. The plot is sort of secondary to the dialogue and characters. But there will be plot. I swear!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [20 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Liking this so far.. Buffy/Mal? I have to admit, im a sucker for that particular pairing..
Comments from author:
I don't know. Probably just friendship as far as those two go. Although, I admit, I originally thought about writing this because I wanted Buffy and Mal to meet.
Review By [ChargedPotential] • Date [19 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
