ABSOLUTELY out of this world!! Whew!

The idea of Faith as Black Canary (or a similar character, since Dinah exists in this world too) is kinda fun. :)

Delightful, witty repartee!!!

I think that Faith probably would have lapsed back into a more relaxed state as she aged and the hard edges wore off. And then Miranda... well, she's nothing but hard edges. Let those two collide, and hilarity ensues.

Ooh, emotions. Nice job. Faith comes across well. I've never watched the movies so I'm not familiar with the Carrow characters, but I guess no one is, if you have to flesh them out yourselves. Good luck with the comic.

The Carrows are just in the background; I don't think the names are anywhere but the credits or a casting sheet or something. However, they appear together on screen a bunch in HBP (holding hands at one or two points, even) and so I thought they'd be fun to make a freaky/kinky/naughty pair of darkly humorous twins out of.

So, somehow Dawn ended up in the Star Wars universe as a Jedi. I have to admit, I'm not big on the Clone Wars series, but this one works.

Basically, the idea is the Key manifesting in different forms across different worlds. Dawn, Zora, K'Eshtan from 'Yummy Sushi'...

Oh, very hot. Yes, me like. You know, you're really evil, giving us only this much... maybe I should invest some money in buying artwork for all these stories.

If you're up for it, F/Z would be about $75 for something I can post here and $90 if you want something not safe for work. I actually had a guy who bought one or two pieces of art for my stories, then went on to become a massive customer of my sister's and has bought so much off her that she had to file taxes this year.

This is kinda cute.

The idea of an obnoxious, Michelle Trachtenberg-shaped green Twi'lek just appeals to me for some reason...

Miranda is just doomed.

If she wasn't the sort to go commando, she would inevitably end up outside Faith's room in her undies.

Instead, she is fated to end up there buck naked sooner or later..

Actually, Miranda does wear some rather racy underwear. You get to see it if you romance her in ME2. Nothing beats sex in the engine room...

... That was just mean. I think Faith was fibbing though, Faith probably just wants to give her a reason to find another shower to use :)

Heh. Quite possibly...

I'm glad to see the softer side of Faith, especially the way she was giving Bellatrix a chance to save her family. I wonder how Lucius is going to handle this, or Voldemort. Even though Voldemort doesn't care much for Narcissa and Draco, losing Fenrir won't go over nicely.

And I'm not sure how useful Bellatrix is going to be for a while either...

It's those kicky final sentences that make your short stories awesome. Just well timed all around. *thumbs up* Thank you.

Yeah, you gotta end with a punch to make people come back for more. :)

Very nice work indeed. I particularly liked the twins doublespeak ala Fred and George.

My sister will be using them in her new comic, so this was a bit of a test run for the pair to firm up their personalities.

I guess fighting evil with evil doesn't leave you feeling clean :(

People seem to forget that. This is kinda a response to the "dark-but-light Willow" cliché that pops up a lot in Harry Potter and other magic-centric crossovers.

This was simply exquisite. It was more than just fun and lesbian shenanigans (though those are enjoyable, never doubt). This had fighting, awesomeness, and actual emotions with questions. The idea of Faith and the Carrows is hot, of course, but the way they took care of her and the fact she vomited after what happened was what made the story for me. Harry realizing that life isn't as easy and maybe he's the on who had it easy perfectly completed this story. Excellent work, and until the next hour.

Pretty much my reason for writing this in a nutshell. :)

I'm NOT surprised that Batoman took Vi. After all, this member of the Bt Family IS kown to fancy girls! I just hope that the Council and Oracle can work out a good relationship with each other

Well, as I pointed out to the others, Batwoman is a self-sufficient outlier member of the Batfamily. So she calls Oracle, who calls Batman, who thinks, calls Oracle back, Oracle calls Kate back, and Kate finally tells Vi what the Batfamily's decision is. It's what people don't seem to get behind why she DIDN'T take Xander. That's a whole lot of waiting to do, even if Batman replies promptly.

Cute. I don't think Vi gets used enough. And finally, a fic that doesn't immediately insert Xander into a position of importance with Batman and Co. just because he's Xander.

And while I don't hate Kennedy like a lot of people do, I couldn't help laughing at what happened to her when she got grabby.

I'm not a huge follower of current DC but I liked this anyway.

More please?

When I saw a review from a mod, I was like "Oh God, did some Xander Stu-er seriously get bent enough about the red herring summary/label to report the story?". I just have to laugh because I seriously did pass this through someone who WORKS ON THE BATFAMILY BOOKS AT DC and he loved my Kate. She is not sunshine and daisies; she's an abrasive and deliberately antagonistic butch lesbian who's a West Point dropout due to DADT. Maybe if they're expecting the pre-reboot Silver Age Kathy Kane, this is out of character but... I've been told I nailed Kate Kane pretty damn well here.