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Review of chapter "The Last Night (Dawn/Kara Zor-El)" from Valkyrie
Review:
And you're leaving it just like that? Come on!

Like the art, by the way, though the hair seems slightly off.
Comments from author:
Not one of Skotti's. I picked it up off DA; this was originally scheduled to have naughtybadFortressOfSolitudefun. Didn't materialize but I figured the pic was still a great hook.

*pokes it a few times*

I dunno. It seems fairly close to the current depiction of Supergirl in the comics, which is a bit off-looking in general.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Last Night (Dawn/Kara Zor-El)" from Vld
Review:
Oh I like that. Not to mention all the secondary purposes. One, with Supergirl there to play major moral figure, Buffy will have less burden on her, same with all the mini-Slays. Whether they like it or not in the end it's better for them. And I KNOW Kennedy won't like it one bit.
Comments from author:
*blinks* Bit of a leap to make considering even I haven't decided where this is going on the timeline, isn't it? o_O
Review By [Vld] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Last Night (Dawn/Kara Zor-El)" from (Past Donor)AmarinRose
Review:
A Dawn/Kara team-up! Cool! :)
Comments from author:
Kara > Clark.
Review By [(Past Donor)AmarinRose] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Last Night (Dawn/Kara Zor-El)" from pnrocco
Review:
interesting but to short for me to really form an opinion
Comments from author:
Well, I left it open to continue. Just not sure where to go yet.
Review By [pnrocco] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Last Night (Dawn/Kara Zor-El)" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I like it.
Comments from author:
*bows* I try.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Last Night (Dawn/Kara Zor-El)" from (Past Donor)Starbug
Review:
Knowing you, this’ll end up with Dawn and Kara bumping headboard’s by the end of the next chapter. But hey; that’s what we all like about you. You could connect this to that Dawn/ Illyria story you started but never continued.

Just an idea.
Comments from author:
They won't bump headboards. Kara might break the bed.

Flying sex for the win. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Starbug] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Last Night (Dawn/Kara Zor-El)" from Ishikawa
Review:
Interesting beginning. I would definitely like to read more of this. Supergirl changing dimensions and ending up in Buffyverse... this would definitely be an interesting read. I always like reading a story that hasn't been done before like this one. So i would definitely like a sequel.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure about a sequel, but I'll try. I've just been trying to do random FFA stuff and this popped out.
Review By [Ishikawa] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Last Night (Dawn/Kara Zor-El)" from Kneazles
Review:
I loved Dawn's attitude about the entire thing. It was very Dawnlike.
Comments from author:
Thanks! It was meant to end up a more Kara/Dawn pairing than a K/D friendship (hence the sexy Supergirl art) but it didn't materialize. Oh well. :(
Review By [Kneazles] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Boys Suck (Dawn/Jean Grey)" from Vld
Review:
Lol! I agree with them, boys sucks! Liked the Pikachu comment and the explanation. And since when did Nori turn blond? And I don't only mean the hair lol, but the kissing Rogue as well. As for Felicia's powers not working on her, I'm assuming Nori is asexual, and only tries to be a lesbian because she thinks being asexual is worse. I'm also assuming in this one Xander and Felicia aren't together, because she doesn't even think about him. As for Scott jerking off on Emma's face and cheating on Jean because she didn't want him to? *shudder* I'm a guy, and I find jerking on a girl's face gross. I don't understand how either guys or girls could like that. Weird...
Last, finishing on Buffy thinking Sweet has been summoned again? Excellent. Simply excellent. And who or what is Exlax?
Comments from author:
The Nori thing is based on a real incident involving two of my friends. My friend was a "lesbian" until she had to kiss another girl and then she was like, "Okay, I think I'm straight now."

Exlax is a laxative. It's kinda infamous because it comes in chocolate flavor and sometimes people will give it away as chocolate, leading to some quality time spent on the toilet.
Review By [Vld] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Boys Suck (Dawn/Jean Grey)" from Sandi
Review:
The dialog is great. The characters sound real and realistic. The advice is good. But the mental picture you leave..... Scott and Emma....... Bad Joe, very bad Joe. No cookies for you.
Comments from author:
*gnaws on you instead of a cookie*
Review By [Sandi] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Boys Suck (Dawn/Jean Grey)" from Sadfru
Review:
I just love that end scene, cracks me up every time I read it (which was only once but that isn't the point) I can just picture everyone just shrugging at her twitching form and going back to eaten icecream, perhaps having buffy chasing after a mutant that looks like Sweet in the background :)
Comments from author:
Did you know that you can make Mt. Dew ice cream floats? o_O
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Boys Suck (Dawn/Jean Grey)" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
hee hee... loved the ending

*ponders*
If this is before the First went kablooey, then, technically, the Jack Sparrow reference would be an anachronism since it was released July 2003...

okay, I'm officially insane if I thought of that...

So anyway, that was a fun story! :-D

EDIT: *pushes up glasses on nose and ponders the pathagoreum theorum* Yes I am... *grins*
Comments from author:
You're such a dork.
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Boys Suck (Dawn/Jean Grey)" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Yet another of Joe's walks on the wacky side. I loved the character interplay and the revaltions of past indiscretions. And I now feel a real hunger for some ice cream.
Comments from author:
I love rocky road!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Boys Suck (Dawn/Jean Grey)" from (Moderator)Malana
Review:
Hee! Boys do suck. Especially Scott. This was really cute. The dialogue was a lot of fun.
Comments from author:
*hugs* Thanks!

M/F sucks and F/F rules.

I'm JoeHundredaire, and I approve this message.
Review By [(Moderator)Malana] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Boys Suck (Dawn/Jean Grey)" from Bobboky
Review:
well.... at least now Rogue can tell one way or the other weither she was lesbian or not... and this review was a natural plural worder
Comments from author:
Hey, I like all reviews. Kayla and I were just joking about how you were our own personal Oz. :)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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