This is intriguing. Please continue! I like the connection between Bruce and Angel. They would look much alike, just from the years of brooding. And Xander would want to keep Clark's happy memories, if just for the happy childhood. Great job, keep it up!

What an intriguing beginning. Definitely looking forward to the rest. I want to find out where you are going to take this... Please continue soon.

Hey this is looking good. Keep up the good work and I hope to see further chapters!

So very well done! Love to see more of this.

This was a great story, and a welcome change from having Xander go as someone superpowered.

I hope there more you have planned; I'd read it. :)

Good start. Love the concept. Hope for more soon. The differences between the comic books etc. Xander knows and the real life of Clark Kent are just bound to make things interesting.

So now I wonder is Xander going to start to manifest Clark's powers? Is Xan going to turn into a Kryptonian? Hmmm. Or is he going to just have the life experiences of Clark Kent running around i his head? Is there the possibility that he will ever meet the real Clark or not??

cool

Nice start. Looking forward to reading more.

I like this first chapter a whole lot, hope you get more out soon.

Great fic! Can't wait for more.

Very nice story so far. I like the concept.

Rob

This story gets a high rating for the mysteriousness of the chapter, and the sense of wonder that goes along with it. I'm curious to see how it develops, both for "Clark" and "Bruce." And perhaps "Lois" and "Diana?" (whoever "Diana" may be ...)

Interesting. A halloween crossover I actually like. So far, anyway. Keep it up. Let's see what you've got planned.

Nice concept for a YAHF - a nice counterexample to the "Xander gains leet powerz" side of these sorts of stories.

For general writing? I didn't feel a strong sense of character for Clark. However, I think that may be because, as a character, he's actually fairly mature and laid back. Thus, he doesn't have any strong 'hooks' that let us identify him as an personality quickly. (In contrast, Bruce Wayne/Batman, emotional cripple that he is, has hooks up the wazoo.) Thus, I'm looking forward to seeing what it is you'll be doing with this.