This is going so well. I am so glad the lovebirds recognize they need their souls, while at the same time being determined that this time in this relationship they will have a say also. Willow's emotional outburst was well done.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [27 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from LadyofWinter
Review:
Please, oh please, don't let this story go un-updated. What happens next?!?
Review By [LadyofWinter] • Date [5 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Wesley is a ghost and so is Fred. How cool that they are haunting together and protecting Angel. On the Cole front, I'm glad that he knows that he's over Phoebe and wants to get to know the girl side of Willow as his demon side already wants the dark witch side of her. That almost sounds like a Willow ramble...Oh..I love that Angel was able to contact Dru..that was very funny. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Review By [romero] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I laughed at Cole rolling his eyes in his dog form. I can just imagine having the little boy run Cole's legs off by fetching and then having to sit and watch cartoons. It was funny when he didn't let Phoebe touch him and then licked Piper behind her leg. I think you did an amazing job with Angel and Buffy. I like the ghost and I almost felt like it was Fred (being smart and the smell of Mexican food!) I love how the ghost protected Angel and only let Willow get close to him with the tazer. I thought your sentence: "She moaned a final time as she let herself be immersed in the feelings only he brought out in her." showed us the depth of feeling Buffy has for Angel (boy, as I fan myself, that was HOT!) I'm looking forward to reading more of this story.
Comments from author:
WOW! WHAT A REVIEW!! I have to say this is one of the best (and most specific) review I've ever received. Thank you! I also want to say Congrats! You are the first to figure out who one of the ghost is. The Mexican food (I had hoped) would be the key to who she was.
Thanks again for this great review. I'm glad you like my stories.
Review By [romero] • Date [27 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This was really good.. I'm definitely gonna have to reread A Willow in Thorns now! Everyone's inner monologue was hilarious.. Well, except Buffy since the whole Angel/Angelus thing.. but still.. Well written!
I'm so glad that you're writing this story. I loved 'A Willow in Thorns' and now I get my wish to know how Willow and Cole got together with the added bonus of Buffy and Angel!! I hope you update date again soon.
Review By [romero] • Date [27 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I feel really bad because I read 'Willow in thorns' but I never reviewed. I am the worst reviewer in the verse and I really liked that story. So, I making a vow to at least just drop a line saying I like a story when I like one. I really liked this story. I love Angel and I love Cole; Willow and Cole go great together as to Buffy and Angel (I can only pair those two together, it's like a mental thing); can't wait to see if Angel's evil and how the whole Cole explaining thing goes.
Review By [sevangel] • Date [26 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Loved your previous series from the charmed btvs 'verse. Willow/thorns love story and relationships was very satisfying so I guess the willow cole back story's time has come. Buffy's love has a price. Keep going, thanks
Review By [PATM] • Date [26 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]