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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from unicornzvi
Review:
Nice start. Since you have Dawn in a lesbian relationship you have to either explain when she began having such feelings (at some point BEFORE her memory ends) or have her freaking out about the fact over and above the freaking out she's doing due to everything else. This additional freaking out would also mean that Kitty might not be the be the best person to explain stuff.

Looking forward to see where oyu go with this.
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Vld
Review:
Her last memory is a few months before she came here? Kinda puts a dump in my theory. If it had been just before she appeared, that would have worked. So unless she has like major trauma-induced memory loss added in the mix, my theory is obsolete.
Review By [Vld] • Date [20 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from purrfus
Review:
Fun, fun, fun. Can't wait for more.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
While I still have no freaking idea of what is going on, I like your story a lot. The cliffies are a pain, but as long as you keep updating, all will be forgiven. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
That's dirty! Hopefully the next part will be out shortly. Keep up the good work...even those pesky cliffhangers. :)
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [19 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from castofftheday
Review:
I absolutely love this story. I can't wait to read more. Very curious about why Warren's so protective.
Review By [castofftheday] • Date [19 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from SaiyaSith
Review:
Very, very good. You can't update this one fast enough--I LOVE it, love the pairing, love the writing, just plain love it! Great job & happy writing!
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [19 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
Like the groundwork you have laid for the story and can't wait to see where you take it.

Curious as to Warren's attentions to Dawn, but I guess I'll need to wait for the rest to find out...

Nice job!
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [19 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
Review:
What a interesting take on this challenge! cool beans, good stuff, etc etc. Anyway I wanted to say how my favorite part was definitely Blue Furry demons bit...well Mutant but you know what I mean...

Cheers
MJ
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SaiyaSith
Review:
Oooooh, you've definitely caught my interest with this one. Please keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter! :-)
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from WinterRayne
Review:
OMG. Cliff hanger much, lol. Love it anyways.
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
Arrgh! Cliffhangers! You devil!

OK. Got that out of the way. :) Another great chapter. So let me guess...Buffy has a brain cloud and can't speak.
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Vld
Review:
My guess? Portal to another reality. As to why she would suddenly forget everything, my guess would be Willow did some magic. If the portal was created by Dawn and she went through it, that wasn't a problem. But if Willow or another witch did something, like "bringing her back", since it wouldn't involve the Key, the energy of the original portal would recreate the Dawn that went through it. And the Dawn that went through it was two years short of memories. Think autosave for videogames.
Review By [Vld] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
Review:
Little rough. Life instead of wife, at one point. Also... if the last thing she remembers was 2 years ago, how would Kitty know something that happened 2.5 years ago that Dawn wasn't aware of? Maybe 1.5 years ago?
Comments from author:
Yeah. It was a little rough, mostly because I copied and pasted the wrong version of the story. As for the other thing, the last thing Dawn remembers was *over* two years ago. But I've changed the line to "almost three years ago" to make it a little clearer.
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SaiyaSith
Review:
This is starting out really good. I like Dawn femslash marriage fics. It's even better when the person writing them knows how to tell a story. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see how it all plays out!
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [26 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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