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Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Dwarves are in the Depot" from Rob
Review:
Another fine part. Looks like the NYPD are well into their Hellmouth ulcers. :)

Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [3 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Dwarves are in the Depot" from war
Review:
very nice scene between Xander and Faith.if the little slayers act like that to Faith they must really hate Buffy.good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [3 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from kellymaxine
Review:
I am loving this. Can't wait for more.
Review By [kellymaxine] • Date [3 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from Bill
Review:
Very well done! Love to see where this is going.
Review By [Bill] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from Allyndra
Review:
I'm enjoying this so much. I love "Xander and his band of Slayers" stories, and this one includes the emotional ties and amusing banter that make me smile. The look at Faith post-Chosen is interesting, and the insight into her relationships with Wes nd Angel are great. And --bonus -- your crossover makes sense! I'm looking forward to seeing the threads of the story come together.
Review By [Allyndra] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from Thewander
Review:
All I can say is more. great job.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
I love you...
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from grd
Review:
I love it when authority figures are stymed by "teenagers". Please continue to embarrasse them more.
Review By [grd] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from meka
Review:
I love this 1 !!!!
Review By [meka] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from war
Review:
nothing like a surprise that the police were around asking for you after a horrible trip.good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: YOU WANNA PLAY OR DON’T YA?" from Cutiepie
Review:
OK, so why didn't Faith go after truck-dude to replace her bike? After all, he was clearly at fault, and she deserves recompense. I figure there must be a reason behind it all, kind of like Xander's cane thing and the (ick!) cigar habit Faith seems to have picked up. I'll try to wait patiently to find out what the reasoning is, OK? Just update as soon as you can!
Comments from author:
It will be addressed (though the short answer is that "insurance" is not a word in Faith's vocabulary)
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: YOU WANNA PLAY OR DON’T YA?" from PATM
Review:
I've never forgotten the girl that stopped the punch in "Chosen" and I choose to see this teenager in your story. Thanks for
continuing that thread. I'm not ignoring the others in this story and I won't comment except to say Holy shit why did you stop!?
Review By [PATM] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: MAD DOG AND ENGLISHMAN" from (Past Donor)vogonguard
Review:
Very enjoyable. A nice depiction of Xander.

However, on a point of information: the point about kippers isn't that they're salted. It's that they're smoked.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
And I do appreciate constructive criticism and corrections, so, Noted. Though in my experience they're smoked AND salted. And really, really nasty... ;)
Review By [(Past Donor)vogonguard] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: YOU WANNA PLAY OR DON’T YA?" from JoeDineen
Review:
Loved the vamp teaching Faith to waltz. Interesting so far
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: YOU WANNA PLAY OR DON’T YA?" from Schiavona
Review:
I like this story so far, as you've stayed true to both Xander's and Faith's characters from Canon. I'd like to see an X/F pairing if you can work it, but so far the story and writing are both good enough without it. I'm looking forward to seeing this story unfold.
Review By [Schiavona] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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