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Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Dwarves are in the Depot" from Hecatonchires
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So I had a little *squeee* moment when he hugged her. It's ok. Loved the idea of Faith having mystique with the younger slayers.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [4 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Dwarves are in the Depot" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
This just gets better and better.

Only one quible; I'd like to see more from the SVU's Pov.

Anyway, it's up to you.

All the best,
Dave.
Comments from author:
Ask and ye shall receive. Sorta. But SVU will start being a more active.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [4 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Dwarves are in the Depot" from eponine
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Goin' good, can't wait for more! I'm really loving Faith so far.
Review By [eponine] • Date [3 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Dwarves are in the Depot" from Sadfru
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Aaawww! so sweet! great chapter :)
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [3 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Dwarves are in the Depot" from DeaconKrow
Review:
Hey this is greally getting good. It seemed interesting at first, and as I wen on I really started to get drawn in. The writing style of jumping back and forth a lot is really difficult to pull off and still maintain a cohesive story but the shorter chapters help it blend easier. I can't wait for the next part, but I think that writing longer chapters might be in order. What you've written so far has been really well done and I like it, and since the two parts are pretymuch coming together I think longer chapters would better show off your strengths and even let out some possible weaknesses (if indeed there are any) to help your overall writing improve,
Review By [DeaconKrow] • Date [3 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Dwarves are in the Depot" from Rob
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Another fine part. Looks like the NYPD are well into their Hellmouth ulcers. :)

Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [3 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Dwarves are in the Depot" from war
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very nice scene between Xander and Faith.if the little slayers act like that to Faith they must really hate Buffy.good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [3 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from kellymaxine
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I am loving this. Can't wait for more.
Review By [kellymaxine] • Date [3 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from Bill
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Very well done! Love to see where this is going.
Review By [Bill] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from Allyndra
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I'm enjoying this so much. I love "Xander and his band of Slayers" stories, and this one includes the emotional ties and amusing banter that make me smile. The look at Faith post-Chosen is interesting, and the insight into her relationships with Wes nd Angel are great. And --bonus -- your crossover makes sense! I'm looking forward to seeing the threads of the story come together.
Review By [Allyndra] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from Thewander
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All I can say is more. great job.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from AnnOfMidnight
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I love you...
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from grd
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I love it when authority figures are stymed by "teenagers". Please continue to embarrasse them more.
Review By [grd] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from meka
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I love this 1 !!!!
Review By [meka] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: All Roads Lead to Cleveland" from war
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nothing like a surprise that the police were around asking for you after a horrible trip.good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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