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Review of chapter "Part I" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Awesome!

I've been putting off reading your stories for a long time, because you've written a lot. You've also received a lot of Reccs, and I can see why :D

Wow, a world where Caleb won and The First Evil didn't... Sweet. Very well described and appropriately, um, 'despicable' ;)

I like your treatment of the Firefly characters and their inner thoughts. Not to mention their language :)

Your fight scenes are excellent, with the right amount of humor.


I don't like how ya use single-quotes for dialog. It's slightly distracting.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.

>I don't like how ya use single-quotes for dialog. It's slightly distracting

You're not the first to say ;-) (it's a perfectly correct method using British punctuation rules though).
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [30 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part I" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Wonderful story, will definitely put my Rec on it.

James
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [11 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part I" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
This was definitely interesting, I never thought of Mal and Caleb meeting under those circumstances...Or ever actually. So, if this is "The Multiverse - Part I" is there going to be a "Part II?" I hope so, this was really good, though I'm not sure what exactly could happen in Part II, but it would be interesting to see what you come up with!
Comments from author:
There will be a Part II eventually (the subject is squarely hinted at at the end of Part I) but as to when I'll get around to writing it I don't know.

Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [12 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part I" from Tanydwr
Review:
Good story.

If you want another option - I'm under the impression that the actress who plays Inara is some evil queen/second-coming person known as the Orici in Stargate: SG1.
Comments from author:
If I ever get around to it I've already got a few in mind (Zoe/Jasmine, Jayne/Hamilton, River/The Ballerina from "Waiting in the Wings") but I'll keep it in mind, thanks for the suggestion :-)
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [8 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part I" from Jalimar
Review:
very funny story. really good as well. great read
Comments from author:
Thanks. I try to temper the action with laughs always appreciate being told I've succeeded :-)
Review By [Jalimar] • Date [22 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part I" from Arekanderu
Review:
Love it :)
Comments from author:
I really should get around to writing Part II one day :-/
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [18 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part I" from Marcel
Review:
This was a lovely crossover. Can't wait for part II :)
Comments from author:
I originally wrote Part I back in 2004 so it's been on hold a while I'm afraid :-/
Review By [Marcel] • Date [21 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part I" from MicheleB
Review:
'I have only three things to say at this juncture’ Wash said. ‘Who the hell is Jasmine? Why does she look like my wife and when do I get to go to the crappy town where I’m the evil overlord?'

***gigglesnort***

Best line of the whole damn thing. I am soooo looking forward to the next part.
Review By [MicheleB] • Date [18 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part I" from cwolf
Review:
And off they go gallavanting around.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [5 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part I" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Completely, utterly, wonderfully fantastic. I'm really hoping Part II comes around soon :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [4 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part I" from (Past Donor)MetropolisRising
Review:
Nice! Very well written. I would have liked to have seen more Zoe, but I know that with those characters, sometimes they're hard to write(from what I can tell). Mal was on the head and I liked that River was her post Serenity self, despite the inconsistencies of the time line( doesn't matter to me, not when it's firefly.) Good job on this and I definitely liked the little teaser or one note joke at the end. Might as well make them clean up after themselves, right? Thanks for this.
Review By [(Past Donor)MetropolisRising] • Date [3 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part I" from Serrafina
Review:
Great ending. Gotta love Wash. My only complaint is when they first arrived in the settlement and the leader guy came out to talk to them, you said that the whole crew had their guns out and were guarding the perimeter, or something along those lines. Jayne and Zoe are the only ones who would do this. Book and River might be watching, but they wouldn't be armed in all likelihood. And the rest? No way.
Review By [Serrafina] • Date [3 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part I" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I like it. Also like how Cable's life ended in the same fashion so to speak. I also like the Jasmine angle.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [3 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part I" from MarcusRowland
Review:
Nice to see this again - especially like the "Part I" because it implies more... Adding to my recs.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part I" from elektra
Review:
awesome!
Review By [elektra] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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