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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from DarkLee
Review:
I am so happy you updated. I'm really enjoying this story, and can not wait until the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm happy you like it. The next chapter will probably be up before the last days of March, but I remain a slow writer.
Review By [DarkLee] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Bluesnowman
Review:
good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [27 Feb 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Dragonhulk
Review:
Yeah, just have to point this out. Only Pete called the rocks Kryptonite in the series, and that's because he knew that Clark was from Krypton, everyone else just called them meteor rocks.

Other than that it looks good so far.
Comments from author:
The way I remember it, Chloe came up with the term "Kryptonite" while discussing the meteor rocks with Clark and Pete. I'm probably wrong, but since this is happening in my storyverse I'll go on pretending that that's the way it happened.

Thank you for pointing out what really occurred.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [27 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from RevDorothyL
Review:
A gripping and intriguing chapter of revelations and increasing mystery. I hope you'll be continuing with this story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for leaving a comment. The next chapter will be posted this month.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [17 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Good story so far.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [23 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Elleria
Review:
More soon as you can please.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I need to think about the next part for a while.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [22 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thanks again.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Elleria
Review:
Update soon please!
Comments from author:
Thank you for leaving a comment. I'm a slow writer, but I try to post a new chapter every month. This time maybe next week. Please be patient.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Ah Hell no, not HARMONY!!! Poor Michelle is going to have a crappy nemesis...
Comments from author:
You'll see...

Thank you for leaving a review.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [5 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Oh, no! Harmony rides again?! Hee!

Meanwhile, love the "don't mess with Andrew's turf" hackers' rule, and the story behind it!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it.

Thank you for leaving a review.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [17 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
Review:
Not pissed off. Ask around, you'd know it if I was.

"Home Security" actually didn't make me think "Hey, that's a fake organization"... it made me think "Hey, this foreign guy didn't do his research right and is trying to say the Department of Homeland Security".

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Department_of_Homeland_Security
Comments from author:
No harm done.

I understand why from your point of view it must look like sloppy research.

Thanks for pointing this out.
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [17 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from ghostwhowalks
Review:
I've been enjoying this story since you started and I just wanted to let you know that. My only complaint is that the chapters are too short! (grins)

Thanks for sharing
Comments from author:
I'm working on writing longer chapters. Hopefully you have noticed that chapter 5 is the longest so far.

Thank you for leaving a review.
Review By [ghostwhowalks] • Date [17 Dec 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Sadfru
Review:
please don't let it be harmony! let her be dust in LA, please, let it be so! :)
Comments from author:
Actually, I'm quite fond of Harmony. In my opinion she is one of the underrated characters you love to hate.

As I pointed out in another answer to a review, it's not an established fact that she is around. Yet.

Thank you for leaving a review.
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [16 Dec 06] • Not Rated
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