Great story! But it's so short! x.x *is about to see if there is a sequel* It seems cut off at the end... But it's an interesting story. What I'm wondering though, is that if Xander was an immortal, does that mean that he and Willow didn't grow up together? *is curious*
Review By [Farren] • Date [18 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
All I can say is this story must continue you can't end it here.
Review By [Elric] • Date [6 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Revenge" from carmsfic
Review:
Very interesting fic.
Review By [carmsfic] • Date [6 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's Revenge" from Schiavona
Review:
I do hope that your going to continue to flesh out this plot line in another story.
While the beginning is intriguing, it's like just eating one bite out of a sandwich. You need to fill out what happens next with the rest of the group and how does Xander explain what they just saw. What are the consequences of this action? How does the 2000-3000 year old Xander explain what he is and how does he explain Willow remembering that she grew up with Xander and Jesse in SunnyHell?
I would give the story a higher rating if it was more fleshed out, but as it is this story is more of an outline of just one chapter in a larger piece.
Review By [Schiavona] • Date [6 Sep 06] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Great start, I hope you'll turn this into a series.
Review By [drdeth] • Date [6 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Revenge" from brokenangel
Review:
Nice start. Hope the rest of Sroobies get a nice reality check and Xander to give them the finger. I noticed the little dialogue you have Buffy omit Xander as one of her friends. Stupid bitch owes her life to him. I could rant but its a waste of energy. Anyway good start.
Review By [brokenangel] • Date [6 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Farren
drdeth
