You've done a great job pegging the voices of the VM crew. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Thank you :-)

As litigious as the States is, one halfway decent lawyer would have both those "law enforcement" types out of a job.

[Laughs] I think it may be something in the water cooler at the local station, it seems every cop/sheriff/FBI agent that spends too much time there, get's bitten by the 'must arrest at random' bug! Seriously, have you watched the programme? It's a wrongful arrest smorgasbord.

Of course, this makes it all too easy for me to hot up the plot a little :-P Yay, for corrupt, prejudiced, stupid, fictional cops!

This splendid crossover has made my afternoon. I cant wait to see what come out of Veronica's mouth next. The lightning speed/crackling lines and delivery was always my favorite aspect of the show, and your tale has so far embodied that same pithy/sardonic wit. Will you be telling everything from her point of view? I cant help but hope for Metho's internal dialog/response to Veronica (or even the elevator ride, which was in and of itself grand), defiantly looking forward to more.

Hmm, a difficult question. I was originally going to write this story in the first person, but I thought it might be too confusing for a multi-chapter crossover. It is still going to be in from Veronica's POV, though, although I might do an 'Agatha Chrtistie' style exposition piece at the end, courtesy of Methos. Or Methos and Joe making an observation on the events at Neptune at the end in the epliogue... never say never, as they say

Nice. I had almsot thoguht you ditched this story. Can't wait for the next chapter

It may take me a while, but I always come back for seconds (or thirds, or whatever it takes to put a FINIS at the end!)

Very interesting so far. Will there be any more sometime soon? Please?

Nice start, and good characterisation of the VM characters - slightly surprised to see Joe involved, but no doubt all will become clear eventually. Looking forward to more.

Thanks :-)

that was sweet!

*Laughs*

Glad you liked it!

I never thought of crossing the 2 shows, but I like them both and I'm definitely intregued. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Quote: Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

I'm trying, I'm trying....*grins*

It was the 'whodunnit' aspect of VM that made me want to write this, I thought it might be fun to write a story in which all her usual suspects/theories weren't applicable!

What a fun concept. I hope that you continue it.

Good start! Very well written, as well.

Thank you :-)

Love it!!!!

Thanks :-)

Lol! You've got Veronica's voice down perfectly. I loved the last line. I would never have expected this cross, but you are doing a bang up job so far. I look forward to more of your story with great anticipation.

Thanks :-) This is the first time I've written 'Veronica' and I was a bit worried I wouldn't get her voice right, as her banter is so intrinsic to her character!

It's a great beginning so far, can't wait until we meet some of the HL crew. I wonder how she'll get out of this....hmmmm???

Thanks, the HL crew will arrive in chapter two. as for how she will get out of this...I'm not telling - yet! *grin*