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Review of chapter "Reviving the Case" from SlowMercury
Review:
You've done a great job pegging the voices of the VM crew. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Comments from author:
Thank you :-)
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [12 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reviving the Case" from Valkyrie
Review:
As litigious as the States is, one halfway decent lawyer would have both those "law enforcement" types out of a job.
Comments from author:
[Laughs] I think it may be something in the water cooler at the local station, it seems every cop/sheriff/FBI agent that spends too much time there, get's bitten by the 'must arrest at random' bug! Seriously, have you watched the programme? It's a wrongful arrest smorgasbord.

Of course, this makes it all too easy for me to hot up the plot a little :-P Yay, for corrupt, prejudiced, stupid, fictional cops!
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [12 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reviving the Case" from (Past Donor)ajayne
Review:
This splendid crossover has made my afternoon. I cant wait to see what come out of Veronica's mouth next. The lightning speed/crackling lines and delivery was always my favorite aspect of the show, and your tale has so far embodied that same pithy/sardonic wit. Will you be telling everything from her point of view? I cant help but hope for Metho's internal dialog/response to Veronica (or even the elevator ride, which was in and of itself grand), defiantly looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Hmm, a difficult question. I was originally going to write this story in the first person, but I thought it might be too confusing for a multi-chapter crossover. It is still going to be in from Veronica's POV, though, although I might do an 'Agatha Chrtistie' style exposition piece at the end, courtesy of Methos. Or Methos and Joe making an observation on the events at Neptune at the end in the epliogue... never say never, as they say
Review By [(Past Donor)ajayne] • Date [12 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reviving the Case" from Arekanderu
Review:
Nice. I had almsot thoguht you ditched this story. Can't wait for the next chapter
Comments from author:
It may take me a while, but I always come back for seconds (or thirds, or whatever it takes to put a FINIS at the end!)
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [12 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jailbait" from Elleria
Review:
Very interesting so far. Will there be any more sometime soon? Please?
Review By [Elleria] • Date [3 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jailbait" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Nice start, and good characterisation of the VM characters - slightly surprised to see Joe involved, but no doubt all will become clear eventually. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [22 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jailbait" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
that was sweet!
Comments from author:
*Laughs*

Glad you liked it!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [21 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jailbait" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
I never thought of crossing the 2 shows, but I like them both and I'm definitely intregued. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
Comments from author:
Quote: Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

I'm trying, I'm trying....*grins*

It was the 'whodunnit' aspect of VM that made me want to write this, I thought it might be fun to write a story in which all her usual suspects/theories weren't applicable!
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [21 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beachcombing" from CrystalOGrapher
Review:
What a fun concept. I hope that you continue it.
Review By [CrystalOGrapher] • Date [5 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beachcombing" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Good start! Very well written, as well.
Comments from author:
Thank you :-)
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beachcombing" from canadiangodess
Review:
Love it!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks :-)
Review By [canadiangodess] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beachcombing" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! You've got Veronica's voice down perfectly. I loved the last line. I would never have expected this cross, but you are doing a bang up job so far. I look forward to more of your story with great anticipation.
Comments from author:
Thanks :-) This is the first time I've written 'Veronica' and I was a bit worried I wouldn't get her voice right, as her banter is so intrinsic to her character!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beachcombing" from ROGMethos
Review:
It's a great beginning so far, can't wait until we meet some of the HL crew. I wonder how she'll get out of this....hmmmm???
Comments from author:
Thanks, the HL crew will arrive in chapter two. as for how she will get out of this...I'm not telling - yet! *grin*
Review By [ROGMethos] • Date [12 Sep 06] • Rating [1 out of 10]
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