Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ChapterSixty One" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, a new chapter. I hope that your sister got help to deal with this event.
You might wish to add some spaces to "peoplestartedcalling".
::Gives the plot bunny a carrot omelette::
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Comments from author:
spacebarsplayingup, sorry.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Great couple of chapters...I have read them in one go...and annoy my sister for hogging computer for an hour or so...now that was a plus.
I wonder how will Buffy react to Hank's letter. And yes by Rat I meant Horace. soo there is Senior Parters who want to get their slimy demon paws on the world, a reneged Watcher that wants to examine Dawn. And I assume that those 3 hit man escaped again.
Comments from author:
Ohhh yesss!!!
Review By [Cristina] • Date [16 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Excellent story. I was wondering just how many and which crossovers you have used in this story and its prequel, Next In Line?
Comments from author:
Reference your query on crossover characters / series...
Pof. Langdon and Sophie Neveu...Dan Brown's characters from The Da Vinci Code
Spooks...UK TV MI-5 drama.... Harry Pearce, Ruth Evershed, Jo Portman, Zaf Younis, Malcolm Wynn-Jones.
Stargate SG1....As if I need to name them...(Getting there,there's a doozie coming up in the next story...nuff said...)
Goodnight Sweetheart... Phoebe Sparrow.. (Dan Carter's Grandma) UK Time travelling comedy to wartime Britain fromthe mid-nineties....(there's a plot bunny ripening in my brain as I type.)
Lewis... Oxford based UK TV police drama... (Spinoff from Morse)... Detective Inspector Knox and Detective Sergeant Hathaway....(There's more to come from these characters..)
All the other characters are figments of my imagination...mostlygotby sticking a pinin the phone directory...
Regards...
Review By [Tempi] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Yay, a new chapter. I am really glad that you got inspired to continue writing on this story.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
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Was getting worried. I would hate for this story to suffer the ignominious fate of being abandoned.
Great new chapter.
Ninja Slayers in Spandex? (stops typing) I'm back.
Buffybot A.I. using .dlls? I don't think so. Otherwise ok.
Hank, I have good news...and bad news. "What's the good news?" Well, thanks to Willow you won't die a slow, agonizing death by radiation poisoning. "And the bad news?" You'll wish you had.
Comments from author:
Okay, so I've left myself wide open to that one... Proving that I know nothing about programming... lol...
Yep. Hank's in for a shock when he finds out about that... I coldn't remember whether the Sodan had symbiotes either, I wasn't at home, and my SG1 DVd's were...
Been following this story, been enjoying it, but melting Sams computer, that is silly, if Willow does not want anyone to know about her she should magic up fake search results that show nothing of interest. Melting the computer is a red rag to bull. It definitely indicates that there is seething there.
Comments from author:
Okay. Fair comment. But there's a reason. All will be revealed. Remember this though... Kennedy did confiscate Willow's computer for a day, and Willow hasn't been able to monitor any incursions. Plus.. If you remember in a previous chapter, a couple of MIT students were trying to get past Willow's wards, and got their computer extra crispied...
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Six" from Cristina
Review:
First great chapter!
Oh wow Gwendolyn Post had a twin sister...I wonder if she is good or has her own agenda like Giles says that its possible. And I hope Willow is OK. And Josh and Dawn are so cute together. I wonder whats happening with Horace and his two minions...they can't be to happy with the fact that they had their faces and names plastered on wanted by police for murder that they tried to pin down on Haley. I so can imagine the tantrum he'll throw...
and now Kingsly have been captured by the Slayers...quick question...can Gua'uld take over a Slayer...technically they are already possessed...sort off.
I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting for next installment!
Review By [Cristina] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]