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Review of story "Accession" from JoeDineen
Review:
Been following this story, been enjoying it, but melting Sams computer, that is silly, if Willow does not want anyone to know about her she should magic up fake search results that show nothing of interest. Melting the computer is a red rag to bull. It definitely indicates that there is seething there.
Comments from author:
Okay. Fair comment. But there's a reason. All will be revealed. Remember this though... Kennedy did confiscate Willow's computer for a day, and Willow hasn't been able to monitor any incursions. Plus.. If you remember in a previous chapter, a couple of MIT students were trying to get past Willow's wards, and got their computer extra crispied...
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [11 May 08] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Six" from Cristina
Review:
First great chapter!

Oh wow Gwendolyn Post had a twin sister...I wonder if she is good or has her own agenda like Giles says that its possible.
And I hope Willow is OK.
And Josh and Dawn are so cute together. I wonder whats happening with Horace and his two minions...they can't be to happy with the fact that they had their faces and names plastered on wanted by police for murder that they tried to pin down on Haley.
I so can imagine the tantrum he'll throw...

and now Kingsly have been captured by the Slayers...quick question...can Gua'uld take over a Slayer...technically they are already possessed...sort off.

I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting for next installment!
Review By [Cristina] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Six" from Dragonelf
Review:
I loved reading the chapters posted to this story
And I hope you will be inspired to add more chapters to this story,
This story is really good as far as I can see
On this I think we all agree
I hope you never will find us commenters to be dissatisfactory.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [15 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Five" from robertlisle
Review:
Great chapter. I am glad I caught up with this story again. I was bit worried that Dan's new powers would make him rather Gary Stuish but you seemed to integrate him into the story rather well. Lots of twists and turns not the least Buffy's father being off-world with the Stargate.
Review By [robertlisle] • Date [20 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Five" from Cristina
Review:
Great storytelling as always...

But I have a small pick...how did Heidi got with Hetch and Mangure (or how*do you spell that) without demons feeling her? I mean Magurie (is this right?) did brag that he can sense a Slayer.
Comments from author:
Re reading this chapter does make me think that I could have put a little more information in.

Referring you back to Next in Line when Dawn and Hayley were in Oxford and avoiding the Bringers.

Willow's jewelery and the associated glamour/spell, hides the persons supernatural essence or signature, this is what demons and vampires pick up on.

Because Heidi was wearing one of Willow's necklaces to look like the local Masseuse, the spell protected her signature, and therefore Maguire couldn't sense her.

Hope this clears up any confusion.

Thanks for the review.

Regards,

Avidreader.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [19 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Five" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
I felt rather sorry for the Dean, until I remembered he caused the death of the boy. Or helped with his murder, which in America, the Dean would be considered just as guilty as the man who did the stabbing.

I love how you tie in things from past chapters, like the slayers staking out Maguire. I do wonder though, why he didn't "feel" them.

I loved the scene in the Police Bar and how they were able to fight off the Vampires.

Gosh, I love the grown-up and grounded Buffy! You do a great job with her character. Actually, you've done a great job with all the characters, but you just seem to bring something incredible to your version of Buffy.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [19 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Four" from DevJannz
Review:
I have not reviewed this story in a while so i thought is was time.

I have really enjoyed this story (and it's parent) and love the way you have really captured the characters. I especially love the relationships you have setup between Buffy/Dan, Dawn/Josh, Xander/Vi and Giles/Olivia. They are feel very organic and never forced.

The stuff with Buffy and Dawn's father Hank being offworld via the Stargate has been interesting as well. I almost wish that were a seperate story though but I understand not wanting to have to update two different fics all the time. I hope we see them all meet soon and see what happens. ;)

Great job!!!
Review By [DevJannz] • Date [11 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Four" from cmdruhura
Review:
Buffy once again proves that someone's own imagination is the best thing to use against against them.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [10 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Four" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
I sure hope that the Watcher's can figure out someway to help Knox with his problem.

I like the pieces you are setting up, as if Buffy and their ilk don't have enough on their plate to deal with at the moment.

Another fine part!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [10 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Three" from Cristina
Review:
wow you bring everything together so nice...I love it very much.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [28 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Three" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Saga? Yes, very much. Please keep it going for a very long time. I like it when you have motivations instead of stacking action scenes on top of each other. It makes the character become more than one dimensional robots.

So I wonder if the vamp invasion of the UK hasn't already started with the two vamps so openly in the bar? It would make sense to for the vamps to try and overwhelm the slayers to keep them too busy to figure out the plans.

I can't wait for the next update!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [26 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Two" from Dragonelf
Review:
For some reason my brain replaced Doctor Singh with Doctor Noonien Soong (the one who created Data).

::Feeds the plot bunny::

I am already looking forward to read any future chapters you might get inspired to write.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [24 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Dragonelf
Review:
I thought I saw a reference to Men in Black in this chapter (Dawn putting on her sunglasses, Bright flash and the blank look of the Dean).

::Starts reading the next chapter::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [10 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
I am going to hate it when you finish this story! You have blended so many plots and sub-plots so well that they come together so seamlessly. You don't stack them on top of each other you blend them together.

I absolutely love how you make Buffy happy. Yes, she has to fight the forces of darkness, yes there are bad things out for her blood, yet because Dan grounds her emotions so she stays even.

Is it my imagination or is Dan getting more powerful, still? Oh, and it was so wonderful how he ordered the food for Buffy! He know the way to a slayer's heart is through her stomach.... But, Buffy didn't always eat like she does now. Another good thing that's happened since dan came into her life.

I loved it when Kennedy decided to stay awake to watch over Willow. Even the most powerful Witch in the world needs to sleep sometime. That line says it all.

I do have a pet peeve, its more distracting than anything else. Every once and while you have Buffy saying something that is very British. While she should be slowly changing her speaking habits, she would still think about a car as an automatic or a straight drive (stick).

I wonder what's going to happen when Willow does investigate the Alien Doohickey? I would love to see Willow and Sam meet!

Thanks for the update!

Oh and I'm glad that you are finally getting some recognition for this story. Congratulation for your nomination, I just wish I would have thought about it or I would have nominated you.

Update soon!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Forty Nine" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
So... Was Sam Finn able to fight the demon because she was knocked up? It would make sense that the demon couldn't understand how much a human would fight for her child. Also why it would work every single time they tried it and didn't that one time. Though it can't be good that for the child.

They need to get Dan into the sun, stat!

I'm torn about Col. Carter attempting to get into another top secret site without letting the mountain know about the situation. On the one hand she's had to react on her before but on the other hand going into the dangerous situation without back and with only a few techs.

I sure Haley will be all right. Bateman either has a master plan for leaving the means of her escape in the basement or he's an idiot! Just smart enough to hurt a lot of people and dumb enough to get caught. I think he needs to be sent the Furzens world except he would more than likely start working for the bad guys.

Nice update! I can't wait for more!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [6 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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