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Review of chapter "A Journey to a Star" from Rogue4
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Hi, I thought you story was great, very original concept. I never would have thought of getting Dawn and Superman together. It was also nice to see that you put some real thought into the plot. It had twists and turns that kept me on my toes. I never would have thought of Dawn being pregnant. It will be interesting to see where the story goes from here. I hope you will keep up with the story, cant wait! Thanks
Review By [Rogue4] • Date [5 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Don't Forget to Remember Me" from khyrra
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I am really enjoying this so far. I'd like more on how Dawn found out Clark was Superman. I am interested to see how her meeting with Martha goes. Ignore the naysayers, there are so many versions of Suoerman universes out there, that one more doesn't make a difference. I'm pretty sure that in the "Lois and Clark" universe that whole Man of Steel, Woman of Kleenex thing didn't hold true. So it doesn't have to in your story. Because it is. YOUR story. You're just borrowing the characters.
Review By [khyrra] • Date [24 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Journey to a Star" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
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Actually, I only know because I Wiki'd the other Superman movies before going to see Superman Returns. Superman Returns is either an alternate universe sequel to Superman 2 or a direct sequel to Superman 2 that retcons Superman 3 and Superman 4: The Quest for Peace. All but S4, might I add, were made before I was born.

It's not a matter of knowing more about the comics. My knowledge of the DC universe is limited to what Skotti's had me read to begin building our Smallville universe. It's a matter of researching your material before you write a story. You wouldn't write a story about a television show having only seen the third season without looking into the first two seasons, would you? Likewise, it's foolish to write a fic about the third movie in a series without knowing anything about the first two.
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Journey to a Star" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
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As opposed to authors who do something slightly more coherent for an opening chapter than "Well, you never knew it but Dawn not only knows Superman but was sleeping with Superman and somehow managed to get pregnant with his child even though he really loves Lois and had given up his powers to try and be with her which is when he impregnated her"? Clark had his powers removed to be with Lois, had sex with her (perhaps even only once), then regained his powers to fight Zod and his minions. That was where Jason comes from. Otherwise, you run into the problem summed up quite well by the title of a page dedicated to said problem: "Man of Steel, Women of Kleenex".
Comments from author:
Ok, I'm sorry I don't know the whole Superman verse by heart, that before seeing SR I hadn't watched or read a single Superman thing. That's basically what you want me to say, right? I'm dumb and you're not? Fine said, thank you. Have a great day.
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't Forget to Remember Me" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
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The whole thing just seems entirely awkward, like Dawn was crammed into a nonexistant hole in the story just so you could have a crossover.
Comments from author:
As opposed to any other fic where non-existent holes are made for BtVS characters to be crammed in? hmm?
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Journey to a Star" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
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great stuff! Dawn has been wedged in perfectly!
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Journey to a Star" from (Past Donor)GACTsevil
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Cool idea, I loved the movie, so I'm curious as to how you'll work Dawn into it.
Review By [(Past Donor)GACTsevil] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Journey to a Star" from waterlilly
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Wow! This story is amazing so far. I can't wait to see what happens next! ^-^
Review By [waterlilly] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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