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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from AnnOfMidnight
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Yeah, that's gotta hurt. I love how Illyria's going to make sure Darrel's okay, or at least avenged. Poor baby!
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [18 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from supernaturalfanatic
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Aww, poor Veronica. She can't always be strong, no matter how much we want her to be. The same for Illyria, though, she is wicked strong. Hmm, I'm hoping for a confrontation between Veronica and her mother. Well, not a "confrontation" like a fight or anything, but some mother/daughter talk... Please?
Review By [supernaturalfanatic] • Date [17 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from supernaturalfanatic
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Well, at least they're not going in completely blind.. They know about her mom.. I wonder how this is going to work.. Hmm.. More please!
Review By [supernaturalfanatic] • Date [24 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from supernaturalfanatic
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As much as I want Illyria to fight on the good side and possibly accept her soul for what it is, I still wanna see a ruthless warrior in battle! Besides that, nice chapter. Too bad Wallace froze up. I hope, in the future, that changes and he saves her.
Comments from author:
I couldn't picture a future in which Illyria ever doesn't fight her enemies ruthlessly. But we'll find out in the forthcoming Angel Season Six comic from IDW press! Aw yeah! Sorry about that comment. I'm just a little excited. Buffy Season Eight is amazing and I'm really looking forward to any and all crossovers Darkhorse and IDW will put out.
Review By [supernaturalfanatic] • Date [15 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from AnnOfMidnight
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Yay! I hope Willow got Angel to un-rationalize what he did to those kids. Cool, it makes up for the pain I felt reading the last chapter. I loved the last part with Illyria too. It must be so confusing being her/him.

Thanks for the chapter!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you feel better. Sorry to have done that to you. As for Illyria, yes, I would imagine it would be very confusing. Don't worry about Angel. He's very aware of what an ass he was.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [15 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from AnnOfMidnight
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This chapter was highly, highly disturbing with the kids. Damn. I have kids so maybe that's why I was overly sensitive to it. It's realistic though, I just wish Spike or Angel had been less scary assholes to them. Angel is pretty bad with kids, but he should have thought about Connor and sucked it up and made the kids trust him instead of scaring them more. Who wants to know the heros are dangerous and uncaring? Spike I don't know. He could have gone either way, so I don't know what to say about him.

Thanks for the chapter though, it was very good and well, riveting frankly. I'll be thinking of it for awhile, and hoping to see a new chapter soon. Thanks!
Comments from author:
It was my fault. Spike was supposed to have come across as sarcastic when he was speaking to the children. He was putting on airs and the kids understood it, that's why they followed him. I'm sorry that it didn't work out like that. I guess it's my inexperience as a writer coming through. I'll definitely work on that. In fact, I'll probably end up editing that little piece to make Spike seem better. As for Angel, he was in a really bad mood. It's not an excuse. I mean, just because a friend of his died, there's no reason to yell at a traumatized six year old. In his case, I was going for unyielding and rude. Which is a very not good way to deal with kids. Thank you very much for your honest and helpful opinions. I absolutely look forward to reading your next review. (If you decide to grace me with another one, that is.)

P.S. I've gone back and made Spike less of an asshole. I hope it's better.

P.P.S. Wow. You described this chapter as "riveting." That has made my whole freaking day.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [4 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from supernaturalfanatic
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Definitely loving this! Anything Buffy crossing with Veronica Mars is great and this is one of the best. It's nice and long! Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate it. I hope that when the next chapter comes out, you still find it as interesting. Your complements and valued opinions have gone a long way into giving me a swelled ego. My friends thank you. (I've now started to refer to myself in the first person and am considering using the royal "we".)
Review By [supernaturalfanatic] • Date [3 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from (Past Donor)Snag
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It's always a good time when someone manages to squeeze The Cheese Guy into a story. Yay!
Comments from author:
I didn't want to you know. I always thought that putting the cheeseman in a dream sequence in a Buffy or Angel fic was *Ahem* cheesy. However, as I was writing this, I realized that I'd put him (it?) in there without knowing it. I suppose I could have deleted the passage, but then how would everybody know that Willow finds cheese to be arrogant? Thanks for reading and commenting.
Review By [(Past Donor)Snag] • Date [3 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from (Past Donor)vinniebatman
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God, I can't wait for Wallace, Logan and Veronica to meet Willow and learn the almighty power of Willow Babble!
Comments from author:
I'd be more interested in seeing the infamous "resolve face" go up against Veronica's stubborn nature. Ooooo. Clash of the Titans!
Review By [(Past Donor)vinniebatman] • Date [19 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from CharmedSlayer
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Oooo ultimate plot twist.. Lianne Mars being a demon. You deffinately have me wanting to know what happens next.
Comments from author:
Please be patient. More is coming soon. Thanks for finding my story interesting. I hope when it resumes it's same fic time, you'll continue to enjoy it. I would like to take this time to apologize for that "fic time" joke. I'm really tired and too lazy to erase it. Of course, typing my apology has taken longer than it would have to erase it, but I have my manly pride, or something. Sleepy.
Review By [CharmedSlayer] • Date [4 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from AnnOfMidnight
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Holy crap on a stick it's Lianne Mars!
Comments from author:
It is in fact crap on a stick. I'm glad you noticed. But I hate to say that it's not all that holy.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [3 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from (Past Donor)Snag
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I always suspected Lianne might be a demon...

Not in your story specifically, mind you. Just in general. ;-)

Great fun, and especially kudos for a good stream of Xander dialogue.
Comments from author:
Lianne isn't all that bad. Sure she's a thieving alcoholic, but she's an alcoholic. In my opinion, she genuinely loves her daughter, but is unable to endure the D.T.'s. Who knows what she did with that money. Maybe she went back to rehab. Probably not though. Which is sad. As for the Xander stuff. To write it, all I have to do is picture the most embarrassing thing I could say and have him say it. It's a refreshing change from high school cuz I used to be the one to say that stuff. Also I once got panced. At an assembly. I feel I can say this cuz it's all kinds of anonymous. Yay internets!
Review By [(Past Donor)Snag] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from CrystalOGrapher
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Cooooool. This is the most hard-boiled I've seen this crossover done. I will now go check out all your other stuff.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you think this is so cool. I hope you aren't too disappointed in my other lesser hardboiled stuff.
Review By [CrystalOGrapher] • Date [25 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Past Donor)Snag
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I knew I was forgetting something! ::Heads off to add to tracking::

Good stuff!
Review By [(Past Donor)Snag] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Past Donor)exiled
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Interesting part and it's getting more frightening with each update! Good work!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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