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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from litmouse
Review:
I am enjoying this. The character interaction is fun without being forced, and the story is moving steadily forward. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Best, Litmouse
Comments from author:
So fixed that typo. As for the character interaction being forced, well let's just say you aren't the one trying to
write this story. Heh, just a little joke. Very little. Like, 5 a.m. little.
Review By [litmouse] • Date [16 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from canadiangodess
Review:
Love you!! It's been awhile since I've read a good Angel/Veronica Mars story. Update soon!!!!
Comments from author:
I'm very glad you're enjoying my story. As you may have noticed, I have just updated. So please leave me feedback on my new chapter.
Review By [canadiangodess] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
The immortal?
Comments from author:
Hmm. The Maybe.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Intriguing. I very much like this so far.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [2 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from canadiangodess
Review:
I love you!!!!! Please continue to update!!! it's awesome!!!!
Comments from author:
So cool of you to say that. Thank you much.
Review By [canadiangodess] • Date [1 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
This is a very good start and set-up to what could be a one of the major stories. Please keep it going, however take your time so that stays at this high quality.

Thank you for sharing your hard-work and vision.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent update. I like your versions of the Broodmaster and Spike. Poor Gunn. I hope Veronica and Wallace become his friends and he can help them in their various quests. It would be cool to see Gunn rip the Neptune sheriff apart in court when he screws up or goes after Veronica. Lol!
Comments from author:
I don't know if Gunn'll end up in Neptune, but you're right. It would be entertaining.
Honestly though, Veronica sure doesn't need his help to lead Lamb to the slaughter.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent job with both Wallace and Veronica. I was sort of surprised that neither Spike nor Angel mentioned how much Veronica looks like Buffy. Evil snicker. I can't wait to find out what is going on and then see Veronica totally warp whatever Angel's plan is. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from canadiangodess
Review:
Love Veronica and Wallace!!! Awesome chapter!! Please update soon!!!!
Review By [canadiangodess] • Date [28 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Fun cross. Can't wait to see where it goes...
Comments from author:
I can't wait either. I have a plan, but these people tend to do what they want.
Kind off frustrating really.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [28 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)Mari
Review:
I'm so impressed--most of this is in character, with the actiony bits nicely dispersed amongst the snarky dialogue bits. Wow. So, Angel and crew are up to something, huh? Interesting.
Comments from author:
I try. I hope you still find yourself interested.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Mari] • Date [28 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EAmethyst
Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter, I hope you write more of this. One thing you might watch, your narrative kept jumping from past tense to present tense and back again.
Review By [EAmethyst] • Date [27 Sep 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from canadiangodess
Review:
I hope Wallace is okay!! I love it!! I can't wait for more!!! 1000000000000 out of 10
Comments from author:
Your math might be a tad off, but thank you for the review anyway.
Review By [canadiangodess] • Date [27 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Chosenfire
Review:
That was incredibley sweet and your Spike was brillant. Good job on your first story.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [26 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MBB
Review:
Funny chapter, and I liked both Angel and Spike in this chapter, so you have a good balance.
Review By [MBB] • Date [26 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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