I loved it. Willow's reaction was belivable. I don't think anyone would have seen that coming. Keep writing.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Huh, interesting. I hope Xander remembers who he is, but with the way Harry's acting I sorta doubt it. Taking away Xander's memory would really lose a lot of potential humor... especially if Xander gets transported back to book one as a kid. lol Well regardless I'm willing to reserve judgement for a few chapters.

I hope the story goes back to willow. If Tara's alive, Willow's probably won't turn things back to 'normal'. She's basically forced to choose between Xander and Tara... lots of interesting angst there. I don't think the story's OOC or anything like a previous reviewer thought. I do think you laid on Xander's anger a little thick, but you didn't veer off course that much. Maybe if the reader could hear some of the stuff Buffy says his anger would feel justified?

Thanks for your comments! Xander is going to remember and Willow is going to have a very tough time trying to decide what to do. As for Xander's anger, I think he'd just finally reached the end of his rope and didn't have time to calm down before he said something rash (like the W word) We will see Willow trying to explain what happened to the other Scoobies though. That conversation will be fun to write.

Yee-ha! What a wild beginning! I gotta say, I wasn't expecting Harry to show up in Xander's place. You set up the story so well, that I got a little teary when Xander was ripped away from Willow -- though I loved that she didn't for an instant give up on him. She was planning right away how to get to him...until Harry walked into the room. And throwing out the names of Jesse and Tara! Woah! And I loved the background about how invested in his Council work Xander is/was, and that's why it cut so deep that Buffy disregarded all his effort. All in all, this was solid, well-done, and intriguing. I can't wait until you update again, and my vote is for slashy vibes, pleasepleaseplease!!!

Thanks Nyn! I'm glad you liked it so much. As for slashy vibes, I'm fairly certain there will be some small amount of early teenager crushing going on. Xander is, after all, such a cutie.

Oh god! This is great! I hope I can see an update soon

Thanks! I am striving to update at least once a week, maybe more if the muse hovers like she has been. :)

Starts with OOC dialogue and character bashing, relies on a tired and overused plot device, internally inconsistent, and not particularly well written.

I've lost interest.

Thanks for your comments. I'll keep them in mind as I continue the story.

I'm still holding out to see where this story goes before I comment too much, but can I just say I love your title? It's so catchy. :)

Thanks Dulcinea. I usually have a terrible time with titles but this one just seemed to write itself at the top of the page.

Kind of confused about what is going on, and want to see more.

Hopefully, the story will be cleared up for you as the scenes progress. There's gotta be a litle suspense. :)

Not exactly sure what happened other than Xander being physically transformed into a slightly dandier looking person with two eyes -- and is Jessie alive?

All will be revealed as the story progresses though I think you'll probably have a clearer idea of what is going to happen with the next posting.

Funny! I let out a loud giggle at the end of the story! My brother had looked at me like I was two fries short of a Happy Meal. Great story!

With a different person having a hand in the time line, a lot would change right? Why does Willow remember the wish? It didn't look like Harry did? Will Xander Remember himself? Are there shrimp in the world Xan's in? Hey magic in Harry's world can grow back his eye right?

Nice begining please update soon!

MerKat

Thanks for the comment, MerKat! I think many of your questions will be answered in the next post and hopefully you'll be happily surprised.