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Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from EvenMoreCookies
Review:
Buffy's not dumb, she's a good person who doesn't like being lied to and deceived. It seems in this story everyone lies to her about everything, except Willow. Even more than in the series. They deserve some serious fallout for that.

And Sadfru, if your idea of "growing up" is happily accepting all the crap people throw at her, then I hope she never grows up. In fact I'd like Buffy to learn to stand up for herself more. She takes way too much crap from everyone in the series.



I don't think using the same ending as the series is a bad thing. I do have to disagree about the season 2 end being that good. I like happy ends.
Review By [EvenMoreCookies] • Date [2 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from Sadfru
Review:
Great chapter and story...and I know it is unfair but buffy is a dumb bitch! who the fuck does she think she is! what she needs is a ruddy spanking!...sorry just had to let out that little rant, hope that xander continues to be a major player and buffy grows up! :)
Comments from author:
Despite whatever mystical warrior thing she is, Buffy is also a teenage girl that has to grow up to soon. And in my story she just had to kill the love of her life thanks to the actions of somebody she trusted. We know it would have happened regardless since its canon history. She doesn't. That it happened like it did, for that I have my reasons. Reasons which involve a certain balancing demon and his bosses......
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [1 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from Rob
Review:
A good finish to this part. And I'm glad to see you will be diverging more from canon later, you've made some good major changes. Looking forward to the coming of Faith, I always like her with Xander, if you're looking for a pairing for him. :)

Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [1 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty four" from deusexsububi
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Damn, there goes Kendra. Wonder where Xander is?
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [1 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty four" from EvenMoreCookies
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Great fight(s). Belmovekk did the same thing to the Judge as Goku did to one of Babidi's henchmen in the Buu saga. Cool.

Can't wait to see how the library scene continues.
Review By [EvenMoreCookies] • Date [31 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty four" from Rob
Review:
Now that was an awesome part! Great job on all of it.


Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [31 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty three" from Rob
Review:
Great part. And I'm curious as too what you have planned for Angelus, and if Acathala is involved. And B&X's 'camping trip' should be fun... ;)

Rob
Comments from author:
In all fairness, don't expect them to return as husband and wife. I meant for them to bond, not sleep together. The silence before the storm remember.....;)
Review By [Rob] • Date [26 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty three" from Iceflame
Review:
I really liked Willow being a beginning Sorceress :). And I REALLY like you're keeping Xander with Cordy (Though every time Joyce goes to note how wonderful it would be for Xander to hook up with Buffy it makes me VERY nervous). and as for Belmo killing the wastes of space called Drug Dealers, Rapists, etc. I say cool! I wonder, given the Saiyen's tendency to increase in power after being near death, wonder if Slayers have a similar ability? It would give Buffy hope that one day she might not need Belmo to take on the REALLY big threats :-D
Comments from author:
First, no need to be nervous. What Joyce and Belmo are expressing is a desire. Fate however likes to roll a different dice. Nothing is written in stone yet. For all you know Buffy might still end up Spuffy! Then again, maybe not (laughs evilly).

The Saiyan near death increase might be an interesting suggestion. Then again, the Saiyans do lack the fast healing ability that Slayers have. Who knows. It could explain why I made Buffy stronger then Kendra. She's been around longer and been kicked around longer.

But there are other ways. The whole part of DBZ on planet Namek is one big increase fest. Vegeta alone recieved 4 power ups and he didn't even go super Saiyan. The whole of DBZ is basicaly one big increase fest. In true DBZ fashion I'll find something other then the gravity gym. To add a zero here and there.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [26 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty three" from EvenMoreCookies
Review:
What? No Anyanka?
Good to see you're finally developing Willow some.

BTW, Belmo going around murdering people (criminals or no), is NOT cool. :(
Comments from author:
It would be a bit early for Anyanka. She will come though.

And Belmo does kill the occasional criminal. Originally it came to me as an afterthought. My Saiyan muse again. Just to remind you the reader that this is not always a nice guy. Occasionally he comes across the dreg of humanity and then he doesn't nicely deliver them to the police, like a Batman or Superman would. Then he just kills them.

In a way it ties in nicely with the sorcerers in the Belgariad who are also pretty casual about killing people. Beldin does kill Grolim priests of Torak from time to time because it amuses him and to send a message to a disciple of Torak that he's still out to kill him. Also Belmovekk occasionally killing criminals ties in nicely with some of the themes of the next part I'm working on.

And yes, poor Willow has been shamelessly underused. I find it hard to write stuff for her other then research girl and Buffy's girlfriend. It didn't help that in the series she only told them she was an amateur witch wannabe until practically the end of season 2 so she had a similar role in the series. I wanted to write stuff for poor Willow. Couldn't have her start doing chi, that would interfere with her future magical career. But she wouldn't start doing magic for a long time either. So she got left to the side a bit.
I hope I can do more now that she becomes a player of her own. Luckily some stuff has been planned out for her.
Review By [EvenMoreCookies] • Date [26 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty three" from Sadfru
Review:
great chapter :)
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [26 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty two" from Rob
Review:
Great part. And nice ending, Angelus is indeed nuts. To avoid the soul curse there's no telling what he might do. Killing Jenny, telling Buffy, maybe even attacking Joyce.


Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [26 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty two" from deusexsububi
Review:
Christ almighty man! This is the best random find I've read in months! Excellent work.

Your dialect is slight different, good writing but different, where are you from? Sounds a lot like something I've read before but I just cant place it.
Comments from author:
I'm Dutch.
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [25 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty one" from Antonio
Review:
Funny chapter.
Are going Buffy and Xander to fight in the tournament. It would be interesting see them fight with people at their level.
By the way: is there going to be a Super Slayer (in the far, far future).
Comments from author:
The tournament thing was just an excuse Belmovekk made up towards Joyce. I have no tournaments planned, except for maybe that ill fated Budokai, prior to Buu. If I ever make it that far (which I hope). As for Super Slayer, there will be no special Super Slayer state like in the 3D Master's Buffy Z fics. That does not exclude other possibilities. That's all I'm going to say about it.
Review By [Antonio] • Date [25 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty one" from SaiyaSith
Review:
Y'know, I really love this story. It's always good for a laugh and a smile. You're doing a fantastic job here, one of my favorite BtVS/DBZ crosses yet. Keep up the good work & happy writing.
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [25 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty one" from Rob
Review:
Very cool part. And it explains the title of the story. :)

And even more fun, the kid will probably cry like a howler monkey, and eat like a Saiyan, Buffy's gonna love babysitting and diaper duty. :)


Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [24 Oct 06] • Not Rated
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