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Review of chapter "Chapter eight" from Rob
Review:
Great part. Gave Xander a break, and I completely agree about that balance thing. You sure can't win a fight if you don't fight to win.

Rob
Comments from author:
For a balance of power there has to be parity. What we saw in BtVS wasn't parity, that was seat of your pants flying work. Tune in for the next Cuban missile crisis next week! If I'm playing an RTS game and all I do is getting creamed on the defense I change tactics and go on the offense.
Review By [Rob] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter seven" from superbrutal
Review:
Ha, another good chapter.

I love the fact that most of your chapters are pretty long, it makes for better reading.
But this chapter wasn't short by a lot of people's standards, I'd say you did really well.
Comments from author:
Then you are going to love the next one. Personally I like long chapters. The way I see it, it should be a collection of scenes, not a scene.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [3 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Rob
Review:
Looks good so far, just hope you treat Xander well. I'm a big Xand fan, like to see humor with Xander in it, but just don't like to see him portrayed as an idiot. So far you've done a good job with him.

Rob
Comments from author:
Xan the man is the unsung hero of BtVS. Except in fanfic of course where he gets his own Xanderzone. Xander wil provide comic relief, make the occasional mistake like we all do but never the idiot. After all, he's the one who sees.
Review By [Rob] • Date [2 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from superbrutal
Review:
Cool, I really like it.

There's a lot of ways you could take this fic, and I'm really looking forward to what you can do.
Comments from author:
Thanks!

I look forward to any feedback and possible ideas. Unfortunately Part 1 is finished and I will be posting several chapters per week. Which maybe not so unfortunate after all. I'm currently working on part 2 which takes place during season 3 of Buffy. So if anyone has any interesting ideas or suggestions.....
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [2 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Sadfru
Review:
great chapter and story, really looking forward to the next installment, will you be doing anything interesting with the whole hyena possesion for xander or lycanthrope for oz as they learn to use chi or magic users like from 3d masters, 'xander as a saiyan' series?
Comments from author:
Oz's lycanthrope will get his own treatment. Xander gets something else instead.
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [1 Oct 06] • Not Rated
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