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Review of chapter "Before you wake" from Sadfru
Review:
still confusing but enjoyable :)
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cutiepie
Review:
Why did the stars stop singing? Do the stars only sing to insane vampires *without* souls? Their ceasing to sing certainly didn't restore Dru's sanity, nor is it a sign that she is no longer a clairvoyant. So, why did they stop, and why did Miss Edith stop talking to Dru as well?

Or was the no more singing/Miss Edith thing a result of Dru crossing to the HP universe? In other words, did whatever it is/was that talked to Dru as Miss Edith get left behind, and do the stars not sing in Harry's world? Hopefully you will clear this up for me in future chapters. I shall read, just to be sure you do. =] Oh, and because I think that this could be lots of fun, too. :smirk:
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [3 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)vinniebatman
Review:
This is a hilarious premise. I kinda want her to hook up with Snape, or at least molest/harrass him.
Great job, and I hope to read more.

One quick note about quotation marks. If they are being used inside of a quote, then the should be singles, ie
"I didn't believe Miss Edith, but she said to me 'You can't go home again.'"
Also, since Miss isn't an abbreviated title, no need for a period.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for clearing that up. I'll edit it as soon as I can. I'm glad you enjoyed it as well.
Review By [(Past Donor)vinniebatman] • Date [3 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lin
Review:
Very good start, a lot of the time i can't stand reading fics with Dru in them...writers seem to have trouble making her sound insane..and make her sound stupid instead. Stupid as in..not intellegent...
Anyway so far you are doing a good job with insanity...hmm..should that be a complemnet? :D :D :D
Can't wait for more.
Review By [Lin] • Date [2 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
I have always be fascinated by Drusilla and her second sight. I would like to see her in the HP realm. Harry would have a great weapon if he would make Dru part of the team plus we readers would enjoy trying to understand what she's saying. I love the "kitty" and the "snake" parts.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [2 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mrpage
Review:
Wow, I like. I like allot. Can't wait for more.
Review By [mrpage] • Date [2 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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