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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Jess
Review:
Good job! Keep it up! I want to read more!
Review By [Jess] • Date [14 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from carmsfic
Review:
great story please post more soon.
Review By [carmsfic] • Date [14 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
The 10 is for the whole bunny thing. Absolutely hilarious!
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [13 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from mrpage
Review:
More? Please?

BTW: Great fic! Can't wait for more.
Review By [mrpage] • Date [13 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Nicely done although I am still unsure as to the age thing I go why then why not...and finally where the heck die Spike and Connor come from and don't start with a bite or the sperm and egg theory.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [13 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Very good. Please continue soon.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [12 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from purrfus
Review:
Oh WoW! Regardless as to why or how Anya got here, she's here now. Loved the bunny scene - I laughed so hard I scared the dogs. Can't wait to see what you do explain Spike as not dead undead.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [12 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Some cool moments, but didn't really flow with the previous.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from CedarPineSpruce
Review:
This is a lot of fun. I look forward to reading the next chapter. :-)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [CedarPineSpruce] • Date [5 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Weaver
Review:
Not too bad so far. By the by, I've come up with a possible explaination for the presence of Connor. The little snapshot of his thoughts said he hated the Buffyverse. Maybe he said the W-word or Hallie got pre-emptive and she decided to kill two birds with one stone. Given Dawn's parentage in this fic, Connor sort of qualifies for cousin status. As for Anya well there's Hallie's desire to get rid of Xander and since she's a Scoobie and one of only two that remembers Dawn she just about fits the criteria of Dawn's wish. Look forward to the next chapter. Connor and Spike are guareenteed to give Jean-Claude a headache. Two Aureilians (technically) on his tuft, one of whom should be dead and the other shouldn't even exist. Come to think of it, Connor's existance should cause headaches all round.
Comments from author:
I was going for the sort of cousin in a vampire type way with Connor. And I like him as a character. Oh the fun I will have messing with Jean-Claude's head.
Review By [Weaver] • Date [5 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Arjai
Review:
Better, and better Anya, Conner, and Spike! Oh what a loverly mess that shall create! Mix in Dawn, Anita, Jean Claude, and Richard andf you have a somewhat potent stew! Love it! Keep up the good words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Multitudes of superlatives there!)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Arjai] • Date [5 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from littleoldme
Review:
I was reading over the reviews, and when I read the first one about familiar elements, it did occur to me that the reviewer was talking about The Life of Brian, so for what it's worth, the similarities are pretty overt. That said, it's more the fact that you brough Anya back deaged as part of a wish than the fact that you brought Anya in deaged- that fits with the challenge and the world you've created. If you felt compelled to rewrite it to escape similarity criticisms, you could simply have Anya and Spike trying to do a spell to locate Dawn and getting pulled into the Anita-verse as a result. It makes sense that Anya would be de-aged and Spike wouldn't, since technically she's human and he's not, and you could just have Connor pulled in because he and Dawn are somehow connected.

Anyway, just wanted to point out that if the similarities bother you (or anyone else), a few revisions to this chapter could get rid of that altogether by eliminating the wish aspect of it all, which in and of itself doesn't make totaly sense, since presumably, vengeance demons don't exist in the Anitaverse to begin with, which means Hallie probably wouldn't have jurisdiction there.
Comments from author:
Actually, there's nothing to say that Vengence demons don't exist in the Anitaverse or are confined to just one dimension. I don't think I want to revise anything yet. Thanks for the review, by the way.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [5 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Past Donor)LisaF
Review:
I thought I'd clarify my earlier comments. One of the parts of this story that seems *remarkably* familiar is the notion of Halfrek granting Dawn a wish to have a friend with her, and Anya getting de-aged and popped into place as that friend. It may be a coincidence how similar your fic is in that respect to Echo's Life of Brian, but I think it's more likely that you read that story and the concept lodged in your head, possibly without you even realizing it.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the clarification. YOu might be right, but it was the only way I could think of to get Anya, Spike, and Connor to that dimension without have to do some complicated spell.
Review By [(Past Donor)LisaF] • Date [5 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from superbrutal
Review:
I never figured Anya and Dawn being really family, but hey I guess Dawn could think differently.

I really don't mind Anya being in this fic, in fact I think she'll bring a tactless wit that Dawn's character just couldn't pull off.

I can't wait for another chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I have to agree with you on that. And Halfrek just sent Anya there because she wanted to break up Anya and Xander.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [4 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Spike has showed! Yay!

But????? You brought a de-aged Anya? Why? And Why Conner? Does Dawn even know Conner?
What have you been drinking?
Comments from author:
Diet Pepsi. I haven't had an alcoholic drink since the Halloween party last week.

Anya is there so that I don't have to deal with giving Dawn friends her own age who will inevitably be Mary-Sues, and of course to provide comic relief. Connor is there just because I like him.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [4 Nov 06] • Not Rated
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