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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FallenRose
Review:
Love the story!!!!!!!!!
I like that Spike is Dawn's Dad it fits with him always being so protective of her. I also like the way you handle Buffy's blood being different she as in the slayer could be part demon the show never came out and said. Are you thinking of a pairing for Dawn and if so will it be someone from Anita 'verse?
Comments from author:
Well this story is going to cover at least a couple of the books. I was thinking Peter Parnell for Dawn. If I timed this right, she would be about thirteen or fourteen during Obsidian Butterfly. But I'm not sure yet.
Review By [FallenRose] • Date [1 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MistofRainbows
Review:
It would be nice if you had flagged it au sense with the junk with the blood it's au. Or hell maybe just rewrite the whole Spike being the father because it smells like rotten cabbage. As for slayers showing up human they do, at least in Buffy's world. Now nothing to say that Blake's world doesn't have better medical tech for dealing with the supernatural but the Buffy doctors wouldn't have flagged it. Please make the thing as Au. I wouldn't bother even leaving a review normally but the rest of the fic was good. I'm so that you will just ignore this review but please at least put a disclaimer in the intro.
Comments from author:
I thought I did put a disclaimer. Maybe I wasn't paying attention. As for the medical technology, considering that the people in the Buffy universe tend to ignore anything unusual, doesn't it make sense that they would not investigate unusual things.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [1 Nov 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good twist. They don't have a problem with her year of birth, because it is only 11-12 years after that in their own time. Liking this a lot so far. Good writing style and lots of potential.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. THanks for the compliment
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WinterRayne
Review:
"the sixteen year old resisted the urge to let out a string of curses that would have made Spike blush." hee hee love that line. Fic's good too.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [1 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Very good so far.
A bit strange with the Buffy/Spike parentage. If the monks used a vamp as her father I would've thought they'd use Angel instead (him being a champion for the PTB, of course)

But keep going.
(PS. is Wrecked before or after the fall of Glory? I don't remember. If before is the Hell bitch gonna follow her Key?)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Angel will not be shown in a favorable light in this story. I don't like him al that much. I openly admit to prefering Spike.

The Buffy/Spike parentage thing was because I really can't see Dawn being only made of Buffy's blood. Even if you factor in magic, Dawn and Buffy would have been genetically identical and Dawn would have been called as a Slayer in Chosen.

Wrecked is that episode in Season 6 where Willow gets into the car accident with Dawn while high on magic.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [1 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from littleoldme
Review:
An interesting take. The AU bit of Dawn being made from Buffy and Spike seemed a bit forced- I can buy that Dawn was part Spike, but I think it would have worked better if she hadn't known about it until they'd revealed that she had Vlad syndrome, which would have told her that her father was a vampire, and then she could have realized that it was Spike, who protected her just as Buffy did. Likewise, the whole bit about slayer blood being different in the regular dimension doesn't mesh well with the BtVS canon, and your story didn't need it- Dawn's tests could have showed up different in the Anita world without rewriting the background canon with some nonsense about the Initiative. I much prefer fics that start at a given point and then go AU from there, rather than ones that write a bunch of random AU facts into the background; that is- of course- just my personal preference. The story on the whole is very well written, though I think Dawn might be handling her emotions a little too well.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and yeah, I know that it was a little force. Oh, Dawn will have a break down, just not yet. And quite honestly, even with magic, I never could see how Slayers could remain completely human on a genetic scale.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [1 Nov 06] • Not Rated
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