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Review of chapter "Twelve" from litmouse
Review:
I keep telling myself just to wait until you're done and then read it, but I can't help myself.
But you're making the minimalist approach work so well I don't mind that much.
Keep'em coming.
Comments from author:
It's actually a lot of fun to make each part stand alone, and yet still propel the story onwards - and all in a strict word limit. Cliffhangers become a lot harder to pull off...

Thanks for the kind words.
Review By [litmouse] • Date [21 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twelve" from Caira
Review:
So, this is fun and engaging and a good read and all, but I'm going to be the umpteenth to say that, cool as the daily updates indeed are, drabble after drabble is just teasing us. ;o)
Comments from author:
Yes, but I'm evil. Mwahahahaha! Though true evil would be doubling up until the upcoming really really evil cliffhanger hits.... and then taking the weekend off. Hmmm...
Review By [Caira] • Date [21 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ten" from Cutiepie
Review:
So I kind of wish that you would abandon the drabble bit and give us longer chapters, but I'll try not to complain since you are at least giving us something. =] I'm just greedy and want more (MORE, MORE, MORE).
Comments from author:
On the plus side, I am updating daily. *grins*
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Six" from (Past Donor)Mari
Review:
These little ongoing snippets of what-might-have been are really interesting. I have no idea where it's going--for example, is Lilly the Slayer going to survive her first vamp encounter? Is She gong to be vamped? Is this the mystery that will change Veronica's life, or are you planning to skip that?--and I definitely want to keep on reading.

Oh--I did want to add how much I really loved the "Gangs on PCP" moment.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Four" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am enjoying your series, a lot. More please? I can't wait for Lily's first vamp staking. And I'm sure Ronnie will be right there when Lily makes a vamp go "whoosh"! Lol!
Comments from author:
I'm certainly enjoying it as well. There will definitely be more parts yet to come, and a few twists and turns along the way.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One" from Cutiepie
Review:
Good, but a typo made me laugh. She used the fork to put punctuation marks on his neck? Were they question marks or exclamation points? =D
Comments from author:
Gah! Stupid self-correcting Word programs. Thanks for the heads-up.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [5 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Excellent continuation of this odd little series. And I love it that Veronica really did use a bar-b-q fork. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One" from SlowMercury
Review:
This is really funny, and for a drabble it gets its point across very well. I love the character interactions. Good work.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [3 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Glad to see another answer to my challenge. Any chance of more California Screaming?
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [3 Nov 06] • Not Rated
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