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While I Was Sleeping

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Review of story "While I Was Sleeping" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I like Cordy's perspective on her new world, and the nice call back to the snarky Cordy of old. Salty goodness indeed! Looking forward to the next installment.

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Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "While I Was Sleeping" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Deanie,

I want more!!! This is great so far! And as for who she ends up with ... Jason or Nathaniel. Purty please?

~Kaz
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "While I Was Sleeping" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Lovin' it so far. I think you've made a good start, and I hope you continue it soon. For the most part I think you're writing Cordy really well, although the Queen Bitch of Sunnydale High rings her hands for NO ONE!!

I think Jean Claude would work best with her. Richard is too much like Angel before he moved to LA, she'd tell him to come back when he gets over it. Asher again is too angsty for her, and she wouldn't take Hason seriously as a love interest.

I REALLY hope that Cordelia in some way or another get to kick Anita's arse, mainly for comedy value. Verbally would be just as good as physically. I think they're well matched in the bitch stakes, Cordelia's just a lot more comfortable with who, and what, she is.

All just my opinion. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "While I Was Sleeping" from Anonymous Reviewer
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What a great start! I can't wait for you to post more soon...as for my pick on who Cordy should be paired with, I think Richard would be great! Keep up the good work!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "While I Was Sleeping" from Anonymous Reviewer
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wow, i really liked the beginning, you characterisation of cordy is good, and your explanation of why she ends up in the a.blake dimension is good as well. i hope to see more of this story soon. as for who to pair cordy with i'd suggest asher or richard, though all your suggestions are fine... have fun with your story.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "While I Was Sleeping" from Anonymous Reviewer
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i like very much!

cant help you with the pairing though... i dont know much about the anita blake world... but i like! lol

paulenak
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [3 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "While I Was Sleeping" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Please write more! I can't wait to see where you take this :)
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [3 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "While I Was Sleeping" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Well, this is just... neat! I like the premise, and the way you got Cordy to the new universe. What fun she could have wreaking havoc in the AB universe! I have no specific feeling on pairings, one way or another.

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Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [3 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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