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Review of chapter "Thoughts" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Cute scene in the bath.

I'm still not sure why Buffy doesn't have her powers.
Yeah sure she's in the past, but what's the saying? Once a Slayer, always a Slayer?
What's the deal?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! The Buffy's powers question will be answered in the next chapter.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thoughts" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Great chappy! Wow, she must really have been out of it to have a boy she really doesn't know dry and dress her ;) Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Comments from author:
Yeah, she's pretty out of it! Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for leaving a review.
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thoughts" from macalaarmstrong
Review:
I love this story, you are such a rock star! I think Buffy and James are so cute (even if she is all depressed). Keep up the great work and update soon. Have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you're enjoying my story.
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thoughts" from spygrrl
Review:
Ok, James' reaction to Buffy's age was the best! Too funny. Great dream sequence in the beginning as well. I could completely connect to what Buffy was experiencing through your descriptions - the Surprise Symphony was a great tool. Poor Buffy. I like that you had her rail at the PTB because of her situation. They do deserve a good kick in the butt! lol Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Comments from author:
Wow, thanks! The dream sequences are always my favorite part to write, and I'm really proud of them. I'm glad you enjoyed my use of the Surprise symphony, I didn't think anyone would know it! Thanks for reading and especially thanks for the review.
Review By [spygrrl] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Healing" from Lin
Review:
When you say no lilly, do you mean not having her in teh story at ALL?
I think she should still be in the story, i think it would add an interesting bit of conflict to the story. I don't necessarily think she should be with James though. I don't feel like JKR really gave us enough information for me to really buy that James and Lilly were compatable. (sometimes i like to think that Dumbledore forced them together so they could produce Harry and save the world)
Either way the story goes, i don't think you should be taking a vote, let the story write itself, don't let your readers choose it for you!
I'm eager for Buffy to get out of the hospital wing and to see how she is incorperated into hogwarts life.
Comments from author:
I'm not taking a vote, just addressing a question that keeps coming up. Lily will be in the story, I just have yet to decide in what capacity. Buffy will be out of the Hospital Wing and "settling in" at Hogwarts very soon. As for James and Lily in the story, I've never understood the need to question their relationship. The last time we see them together they are fifteen years old. Remus says in the fifth book that they don't even start dating until seventh year. A lot can change in two years, especially at that age.
Review By [Lin] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Healing" from KnightOwl
Review:
It will be interesting to see how she does without her slayer senses and strength. I am really looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thank you for leaving a review.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Healing" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Great chappy. Can't wait to read the next, longer, chapter :) And I vote for no Lily! It's fun to change it up a bit and take things and people out and add new ;)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I will certainly take your vote into account. Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [10 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Healing" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Interesting premise. I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [10 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Truth" from bschex
Review:
I just found your story and I love it!!! I hope update it soon, I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review! I'm glad you are enjoying my story, and I will be updating quite soon.
Review By [bschex] • Date [3 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Truth" from spring
Review:
^_^ I love this chapter! This entire fic is wonderful. I am extreamly eager for the next chapter of this fic. I think the relashionship between James and Buffy should be intresting to see develope in the future chapters. More soon please! Oh I have to wonder is Buffy still a slayer? Again I love this fic more soon please.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review and the compliments! It too am interested in the idea of a Buffy/James relationship of any kind, as I don't think it's been done before. Your question about the slayer will be answered in the next chapter.
Review By [spring] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Truth" from WittyNinja
Review:
Thanks so much for updating! Keep up the good work. This story rocks.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much! I appreciate you taking the time to review.
Review By [WittyNinja] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Truth" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Oh update soon please. You can't leave it like that :) Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to review, and don't worry I won't be leaving it here!
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [18 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Truth" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Oh hell.

Did she lose her Slayer ability when she went thru the portal?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Your question will be answered in the next chapter.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Truth" from HunterH
Review:
Poor Buffy:( Can't wait to read more :)
Comments from author:
Poor Buffy? Just wait.
Review By [HunterH] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking Up" from spring
Review:
I love this wonderful fic please please update again. Soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [spring] • Date [7 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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