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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from VillageOrchid
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I'm generally liking the story... I'm a bit concerned with Dawn acting like she's 13 or 14 rather than 17. She'd know not to explain she was a former ball of energy, wouldn't she?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Nov 06] • Not Rated
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