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Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from Sadfru
Review:
great chapter :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This was very good, from the horror of retelling Xander's younger life to the emotions and dialog of the characters through out the plot of this chapter. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from Jess
Review:
That's so cool! It's heartbreaking, heart warming, and fun all in the same chapter... you are very good.
Comments from author:
Thank you so very much *blush*
Review By [Jess] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from purrfus
Review:
Really glad you decided to continue this story line. The first was great and now I have very high expectations - no pressure of course : }
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'll do my best to live up to the high expectations. ;-)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from mrpage
Review:
Great chapter! Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thank you and more is coming soon, there'll be at least 1 update sometime during Thanksgiving week... and if I can swing it, I'll try for 2, no promises though because it's going to be a very busy week.
Review By [mrpage] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from Toras
Review:
Another excellent chapter. I've been following this story since I first tripped over the first part in the series, and I have to say it's quite good. You've taken the base mythos of the show and mythology and put a fascinating twiist on them. Keep up the great work.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much and I'll do my best to keep up the quality of the stories.
Review By [Toras] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from Thewander
Review:
very good, glad to see Xan meet up with the kents. Cant wait for the next part
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from RoseGoddess
Review:
This is really good. I just read both the first fic and what there is of this one and all I can say is "when do we get the rest?" Soon please? (*smiles sweetly*) What I can't wait for is to see how the other Smallville characters react to Xander. Particularly Whitney and his bullying. And, is Pete going to get all jealous?
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. There's still a few chapters before school starts and the biggest part of the Smallville characters start being introduced. We'll probably see Pete introduced before then though, what with him and Chloe being Clark's best friends. As for jealousy.... well, we'll have to see what happens.
Review By [RoseGoddess] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from kcjadesolo
Review:
more please, this is a great story, i can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it. Hopefully the next chapter will be up before Thanksgiving day (Thursday for those who aren't familiar with American holidays).
Review By [kcjadesolo] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from Alianna
Review:
pretty cool, more please!
Comments from author:
Thank you and I'm working on getting more ready to post.
Review By [Alianna] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from Trom
Review:
Been really enjoying the thunder series, sorry took so long to review. Only thing I think about this chapter is that Jonathan Kent is not the kind of guy to allow that kind of behavior to happen so I think he would have kicked the crap out of Tony Harris without Clark needing to interfer. He is a corn fed farm country boy after all. Still I am looking forward to more of the story.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you're enjoying it. And you're right about Jonathan, he probably would have kicked the crap out of Tony given the chance. In this instance, Clark just beat him to it. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story though.
Review By [Trom] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from Ladeia
Review:
I really enjoy this story and can't wait for the next part. I hope Xander doesn't take off. He could use living with some people that actually give a damn about him. I can't wait to see the boys find out each others secrets. Poor Martha and Jonathan... having to deal with two superpowered teenagers... *eg* Hurry back with more soon.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story and you're right about that, Xander could definitely use to live with people like the Kents, since they're the kind of folks that could undo a lot of the damage Tony did to Xander's psyche. Unfortunately, I try not to spoil things, so you'll just have to wait and see what happens. :-)
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from (Past Donor)LisaF
Review:
Wow, what a great story! I just read the first story and then this chapter, and I have to say I am mightily impressed. I love the way you're developing Xander's character in light of his powers, and particularly the fact that his character's not changing dramatically just because he has powers. It's especially nice to see a powerful Xander who doesn't automatically turn into an over-confident jerk who smirks constantly.

I'm really looking forward to seeing what comes next. But I also keep thinking, "Two superpowered teenagers in the same house? Poor Martha!"
Comments from author:
Thank you, I''m glad that you're enjoying my stories so much. I know what you mean about the way so Xander suddenly turns ultra-confident in himself just by gaining powers of his own in a lot of stories, but speaking from personal experience, poor self-image and low self-esteem, especially that stemming from mental/physical abuse, just isn't that easy to overcome. So I'm trying to keep true to the character as I see him.

And yeah, once the boys, and Ma and Pa Kent, put all the cards on the table... things are going to get pretty interesting.
Review By [(Past Donor)LisaF] • Date [17 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from Jess
Review:
I am loving it already! More please! I beg of you!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. I'll try to keep updating as steadily as I can. Chapter 3 is already with my beta, so hopefully it'll be up in a few days.
Review By [Jess] • Date [17 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from Sadfru
Review:
great chapter :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Not Rated
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