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Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from Trom
Been really enjoying the thunder series, sorry took so long to review. Only thing I think about this chapter is that Jonathan Kent is not the kind of guy to allow that kind of behavior to happen so I think he would have kicked the crap out of Tony Harris without Clark needing to interfer. He is a corn fed farm country boy after all. Still I am looking forward to more of the story.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you're enjoying it. And you're right about Jonathan, he probably would have kicked the crap out of Tony given the chance. In this instance, Clark just beat him to it. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story though.
Review By [Trom] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Admissions" from Ladeia
I really enjoy this story and can't wait for the next part. I hope Xander doesn't take off. He could use living with some people that actually give a damn about him. I can't wait to see the boys find out each others secrets. Poor Martha and Jonathan... having to deal with two superpowered teenagers... *eg* Hurry back with more soon.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story and you're right about that, Xander could definitely use to live with people like the Kents, since they're the kind of folks that could undo a lot of the damage Tony did to Xander's psyche. Unfortunately, I try not to spoil things, so you'll just have to wait and see what happens. :-)
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from (Moderator)LisaF
Wow, what a great story! I just read the first story and then this chapter, and I have to say I am mightily impressed. I love the way you're developing Xander's character in light of his powers, and particularly the fact that his character's not changing dramatically just because he has powers. It's especially nice to see a powerful Xander who doesn't automatically turn into an over-confident jerk who smirks constantly.

I'm really looking forward to seeing what comes next. But I also keep thinking, "Two superpowered teenagers in the same house? Poor Martha!"
Comments from author:
Thank you, I''m glad that you're enjoying my stories so much. I know what you mean about the way so Xander suddenly turns ultra-confident in himself just by gaining powers of his own in a lot of stories, but speaking from personal experience, poor self-image and low self-esteem, especially that stemming from mental/physical abuse, just isn't that easy to overcome. So I'm trying to keep true to the character as I see him.

And yeah, once the boys, and Ma and Pa Kent, put all the cards on the table... things are going to get pretty interesting.
Review By [(Moderator)LisaF] • Date [17 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from Jess
I am loving it already! More please! I beg of you!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. I'll try to keep updating as steadily as I can. Chapter 3 is already with my beta, so hopefully it'll be up in a few days.
Review By [Jess] • Date [17 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from Sadfru
great chapter :)
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Review By [Sadfru] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from Alianna
great start, can't wait to read what happens next! :))
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [Alianna] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from Wynde
Great start to the new story! I really enjoyed the first one and was looking forward to this. You've definitely made me all curious about just what happened the last time Xander visited the Kents. I can just picture Xander and Clark having a haybale tossing contest. I can even picture them trying to teach themselves how to fly by shoving each other out of the hayloft. I look forward to seeing more soon.
Comments from author:
I'm looking forward to seeing them arm-wrestle personally...since I could definitely see super powered teenaged boys doing something like without regards for the damage they could do to whatever they use for a table ;-)

Glad that you're enjoying it, and I won't keep you in suspense over the details of Xander's first visit for long, honest.
Review By [Wynde] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Excellent first chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Look for more soonish.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from GeroRRA
Very nice start. :)

Xander and Chloe were acting a little too friendly for having met so soon for my tastes, but it's not a big thing.

Looking forward to more!
Review By [GeroRRA] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from angelkitty
yea its back i cant wait to read more and poor xander i hope that he gets out to the kent farm soon, hope for more soon
Comments from author:
Thank you, and I'll keep the updates rolling out as fast as I can churn out quality fic and get it past my beta reader.
Review By [angelkitty] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from shazamfan
Okay...I can't hold out reviewing this new tale! I first ran across the Echo of Thunder story just three days ago and thought...what the hell! I'll give it a shot! All the while thinking that Xander was going to say the magic word 'SHAZAM' or something and soon be off to Smallville. Much to my suprise and joy that didn't happen! Instead an even better idea using Thor came about and I was hooked from the start. Then today on a lark I popped onto the site to see what was going on and WHAM! A new tale!

So far this hasn't been a let down! From the details of Xander's arrival and his meeting of our loyal friend and reporter it has held me and kept me wanting more and more! Hints to his meeting the last time around with the Kents leave you wanting more and I'm looking forward to him showing up at the farm and how each of the Kents will react. Can't see Martha pushing out the door, but I can see Mr. Kent getting on his high horse...wondering if Xander might be a little like his old man or how they are going to keep Clark's secret from Xander if he sticks around. Clark will be happy until his dad points out that last fact...then he will wonder if he has to lie to yet another person. Somehow I get the feeling that Xander is going to be helping out around the farm and slip up with his new found strenght! That should be an eyeopener for all the Kents!

And then comes two meetings I look forward too the most. Both Luthors! Xander is not the nice and noble Clark...sure he has Thor's blood in him, but beyond his noble Asgard background he is also a warrior and will no doubt give the elder Luthor a stern warning before too long. As for Lex...well perhaps he'll be a friend like Clark...or perhaps not! Either way I see Xander tossing out remarks at Lex along with a nickname as he did with Dead Boy (Angel) and Fangless (Spike)!

I hope the next chapter will be coming around soon!

Comments from author:
Wow, I only hope I don't disappoint in future updates.

And your right about one thing... our boy Xander is a warrior at heart and if (or when) the Luthors cross him, I wouldn't want to be in their shoes. And I doubt it'll take long for Lex to earn himself a Xander-style nickname...once he shows up and hits somebody with his car...

As for the secrets behind Xander's last visit and the reactions of the Kents to his arrival... well, they won't be too much longer in coming.
Review By [shazamfan] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Yeah, more Thunder God story! Can't wait to see how the Kents react to Xander.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the encouragement... and some of the Kents start showing up as early as next chapter.

Now when they'll figure out something is different about our boy... that's another question altogether.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from MrKlortho
Love this story, but one thing about it really does piss me off royally. I cant BELIEVE that I have to wait to read the next chapter!! Please hurry
Comments from author:
If I can go the rest of the week without any further floods in my apartment, and if my Beta cooperates, I'll have the next chapter up this weekend if not sooner.
Review By [MrKlortho] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from Bobboky
excellent, very nice
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 – Arrival" from misagoddess
Nice start! I'm glad that Chloe (one of my favorite characters) is the first person Xander meets and makes friends with. And maybe with Xander's help, Clark could be a bit less clueless and/or stuck on Lana (I never did like her character).

I am finding the little bit of information about Xander's childhood visit a *little* ominous though. Did Clark hurt Xander by accident? That would explain a lot.

I can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my first steps into the Smallville verse in this story.

I doubt that anything short of an act of God and firm beating with a Kryptonite Clue-stick could help Clark get unstuck on Lana...but we'll see.

And for the next chapter: Answers to what happened to Xander on his first trip to Smallville!!

And if my apartment will quit having water problems, I'm still hoping to get Chapter 2 up by the weekend.
Review By [misagoddess] • Date [14 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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