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Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
Review:
This is the funiest thing I have read in weeks...wow. You have also done the best Lorelai I think I've read, in not ever in a very long time. I cannot wait tosee what's next.

Cheers
MJ
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind words.
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
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Another one I've missed! You've got to finish this, as I'm sure you will.

I've never seen the 'Gilmore Girls' I think it was on Sky One awhile back but I never watched it.

Anyway, very funny very good keep writting.

Dave.
Comments from author:
Thanks, working on it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [22 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from asqwerth
Review:
"It must be because they go really fast. On their motorcycles. And they’ll be all blue when they come and red when they leave. Because of Doppler. And his effect.”

I dunno why, but that really cracks me up. At least, over and above how this chapter already cracked me up.

Brilliant chapter as usual. Rory/L interaction was spot on. I could actually visualise the conversation taking place, as I read your words.

And how EEEEEEEVIL are the Scoobies ?!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind words. Glad you liked the Doppler joke, one of those things seems funny when you write it, then you wonder...
Review By [asqwerth] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from KarlStahl
Review:
Hilarious. Very funny, I laughed a lot while reading. The Gilmore Girls banter was excellently done.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [KarlStahl] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from CPTSkip
Review:
Oh god! I am so glad you've only written one chapter so far. If you had written two, I'm afraid I would have exploded from all my laughter. Your dialog for Lorelai and Rory was perfect. I can't wait for the convention. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the kind words. Working on the con now.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from Greywizard
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ROTFLMAO when I found this! Fortunately, I know enough not to be drinking anything while reading any of your stories! Simply Awesome! And I'd love to see actual photos of ALL of the girls in their various costumes. Especially Dawn! ;-)

Thanks for a great chapter! Now, where's the next one? ;-)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind words. Next one's brewing...
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from physicsteach
Review:
This brings great joy and laughter to my life, and I am grateful, all the more so because of how well-written this is.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from Thewander
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Funny very funny, keep going.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from tactless
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I have to say that I found the chapter difficult to read...What with the tears and the laughing and all. Excuse me I have to go wrap my ribs now
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [tactless] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from Ouatic
Review:
You're trying to kill me!
Review By [Ouatic] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from Kenshin
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Awesome, I love Gilmore Girls or maybe I should better say: I loved it. Season 1-5 were great, but the things they did in Season 6/7 I don't really like. Big Luke/Lorelai shipper here, actually the main reason I watched the show were those two :) The dialogue between Lorelai and Rory was good, looking forward to chapter 2.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Didn't much care for S6-7 myself...
Review By [Kenshin] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Ow, ow, ow.... Oh, gods, it hurts laughing this much on a Saturday morning before I'm properly awake! Love the Rorie and Lorelai interaction, it's spot on, as are the rest.

Thanks for sharing, and I'm going to make certain not to drink anything when I read the next chapter. :-D
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind words.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from arkeus
Review:
this pure, excellent crack. please do go on :-)
Review By [arkeus] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from littleoldme
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You do the Gilmore characters justice. You in fact do a better job of writing than dialogue than some of the current writers do. I'm a little confused as to why everyone is dressed up like Xander, but I'm guessing I need to read the previous stories to really understand. I look forward to an udpate.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
The next chapter should clear up the dressing up like Xander business, but, well, Viva Los Xanders will give it a little depth and a laugh or two (if I say so myself)
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from Booster
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I'm giggling like a loon right now at those mental images.

.......apart from the Buffy and Dawn dressed as Faith ones. Mmmmm!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Booster] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
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