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A Schism in Stars Hollow:A Father Goose Digression

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Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Immigration" from pagefault
Review:
"It was still relatively rare, but there were enough slayers with children now to establish that it was possible."

Robin Wood is the son of Slayer Nikki. The scoobies knows that and wouldn't have wondered if it was possible.


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I'm sorry, you are right. I didn't even consider Robin being born pre-calling. I always just assumed it was post calling because slayers are called so young. I don't recall canon making it (pre or post) clear either.
Comments from author:
Appreciate your input.

Felt that I had to put that in as I don't know that it was ever clear whether Robin was conceived/born before or after Nikki was called. Still, your point is taken and I've added a line to make it clear that Nikki was not forgotten.
Review By [pagefault] • Date [13 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Witches Promise" from (Past Donor)AmarinRose
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I didn't even realize you'd finished this, but man what a ride! I feel so bad for Luke and Lorelai, and the twist with the Gilmore family demon was interesting. And I did love Vanessa getting to meet her idol. Wyndham was also a cute touch.

I am afraid I don't get the asp thing, though.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.

The accredited creator; and reputed iron-handed showrunner and chief writer of Gilmore Girls for the first six seasons was Amy Sherman-Palladino, comonly known as ASP... Yeah, I know, not a hip-slapper, but it gave me the idea.....

I generally pay little attention to backstage stuff ... but one of the reasons that GG is so fascinating that, while most shows go down the tubes when the creative people move on or the network interferes, ASP seems to have destroyed her own show, some allege, deliberately...
Review By [(Past Donor)AmarinRose] • Date [6 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Witches Promise" from KarlStahl
Review:
Very good story. It fits very well into the world you are creating. Quite an interesting take on the "Gilmore world". I'm a little sad, the XLHs were disbanded; they were so much fun. A hard, but unavoidable choice.

I really enjoyed reading the whole story. Thank you for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the XLH, I had fun with them.
Review By [KarlStahl] • Date [25 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from Thewander
Review:
Very nice. cant wait for any more in this wonderful world you build for them
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [24 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Witches Promise" from Hecatonchires
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I thoroughly enjoyed this series - it was mostly lighter, and fun. The 'b' plot with the kids looking for the real faith was cute, and reminded me of a bit out of a gordon korman book.

Looking forward to teh next chapter in your knight & goose stories ^_^
Comments from author:
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [24 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Witches Promise" from SamJames
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Very good and oddly touching story even for someone who has never watched a GG episode. The whole idea of a XLH society is hillarious. Even though Giles was right and the society clearly was hurting the Scoobies reputation if demons thought they could be paid protection money, I still felt sorry for them.
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [SamJames] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Witches Promise" from SassyFrass
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Good ending, it fit the story very well. I enjoyed it, and I totally agree with the patheticness that is the current season of GG. ARGH!!! How could they do that?! Anyway, I loved the story, and just about lol'ed when Kirk was revealed as a demon. It explains so much. Hee hee. Anyway, good job.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Witches Promise" from (Past Donor)DonSample
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It's always bitter-sweet to see a good story come to an end. I think that this is my favourite of the Father Goose stories, so far. It's light on action, but there's lots of good fun in it. I was a little disappointed that we didn't get to see Andrew's presentation on "Our Hero in Cyberspace." Perhaps some other time. (The "Way of Life" faction can still carry on, they'll just have to find some other way to fund themselves.)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kinds words...

Our Hero ... yeah, I was kind of sorry to have to cut that... maybe an offshoot sometime.
Review By [(Past Donor)DonSample] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Witches Promise" from Ghostrider
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A sad ending to a beautiful story. I've never really watched GG, although I did catch a snippet now and again. Your blending of the two universes is very well done and I don't feel you've written yourself into a corner. Sometimes, even with the best of intentions, things just don't work out. This is one of those times, sadly. Lorelei, chose, even if she didn't know that she did. She has to live with the consequences.

Again, a fantastic story in your little universe.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your kind words. And you probalby right about Lorelai... it's just the older I get the more I prefer mercy to justice... but just couldn't make it work here.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Witches Promise" from CPTSkip
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That certainly explains Kirk. *evil snicker* Sookies "dream" made me laugh out loud. And now to Lorelei's fate. Ah, but there is always hope. Like the last thing out of Pandora's Box, there is always hope. Great story and you gave me some wonderful laughs. Even with the melancholy ending, you just keep writing some of my favorite stories. I just hope there is another one coming soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind words.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Witches Promise" from (Past Donor)vogonguard
Review:
Well done. A lovely series of character enlightening moments. I don't know what you're planning to do next but don't tie yourself down to just crossovers: I'd like to see more of your idea of Faith and Xander's life together not to mention your Giles, your Dawn, your Buffy... Your Willow isn't as well developed as the others: perhaps you're not as simpatico with that character as the others.

But write please! Write more!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind words. Point taken re non-crossovers but, in the foreseeable future the xover is the element that gets the story started.

As to Willow... I've made her perhaps a little to powerful to fit easily into the main story(s) ... but her time may come.
Review By [(Past Donor)vogonguard] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Witches Promise" from Bumpkin
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Ahhh, a satisfying end - very good story. I only wish we could have gotten a lot of the poor convention-goers reactions to the big shut down - heh, that could have been so much fun to explore. Of course, I understand why you didn't do it here, it wouldn't have fit at all - but hey, we all have our personal quirky likes yeah? :) Oh and I totally know what you meant about GG - my sister was an avid watcher and said very much the same thing, so much promise that just fizzled out of the show being dragged on for too long - nasty network execs need to know when to end the story. Yeah, so, this was an excellent read and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. :)

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind words. Tried to fit a few more reactions in but it just seemed to bog the story down.

Sad part about GG is I think it could have easily filled 7 seasons if they'd just let the characters grow.... but so it goes.
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Witches Promise" from khimeraus
Review:
woowoo!! great story!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [khimeraus] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Arrivals" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Ah the end! I'm sure it would have meant more to me if I'd ever actually seen the Gilmore Girls! However, another great story looking forwardto the next one.

Keep 'em coming.

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Thanks as always for the good word.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Witches Promise" from Kenshin
Review:
Love it, looking forward to what you come up with next, may it be another story in this series or something entirely new. Thank you for these great stories :D
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Kenshin] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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