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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from APS
Review:
My thought about the fic as a whole.

Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Damn, What was Tara doing there?
Comments from author:
You know, you're actually the first person to pick up on that. I was expecting a bigger response when I decided on her instead of Cordelia (as I originally intended), but it seems to have passed most people by.

As for what's she's doing there, well you'll just have to wait and see...
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Really enjoying your story... can't wait for more!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
OK I'm adding to the list of things I don't like....I don't like stories that end on a cliffhanger....on the other hand you do talk about a longer sequel with LONGER chapters...wooohooo! Please don't make the suspense last long.....
Comments from author:
Unfortunately for you, I just LOVE writing cliffhangers...
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
OK I just want longer chapters and failing that faster updates....by the way red herrings can be fun
Comments from author:
Sent the last chapter to Baladen just after I posted this one.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [27 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Godot
Review:
Very interesting. Bringing in a Time Lord, eh?
Review By [Godot] • Date [27 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from SilverWave
Review:
"you look at me and you see the woman who ordered your rape and torture. I may, in light of recent events, regret my actions"

Ok I'm outahere
[EDIT] OK sorry for the abrupt comment, here goes...
It just didn't work - dealing with the woman who would order her raped and tortured?
Maybe cut the bitches throat... but not have a nice chat.
Xander's "you cant help who you are attracted to"... nah somethings wrong with you if you are attracted to a rapist...

Thats when I reread the story and decided that it was not my cup of tea.
Comments from author:
Why?

[Edit]

Well, Cain never raped anyone: In the Razor TV-movie she was understandably upset when she found out that the woman she was involved with was in fact a Cylon. I doubt that she would have reacted the same if not for that sence of personal betrayal.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Earthmage
Review:
Oh fracking hell... I always look forward to another installment of Cellmates and this was no exception.

Hehehe

"He's" Coming eh?... then the whole Fobwatch...

*starts drumming and singing*
wooooooo weeee-ooo-wooooo

Lol, let's make Xander gallifreyan too!

Love it, more please!
Review By [Earthmage] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Elleria
Review:
Love this. I'm sensing a Doctor Who influence here perhaps?
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Ceries
Review:
2 things,

1 LOVEING this story. :)

2 a non working fob watch.. are we insinuating Saul is a Gallifreyian? :)
Review By [Ceries] • Date [25 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from wraiths
Review:
I like this story especially how OC Cain is. But please be careful if you make this a Doctor Who crossover. Multiple crossovers are notoriously difficult to keep on track.
Review By [wraiths] • Date [25 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from matthew
Review:
So which Time Lord of Gallifrey are we looking at, here? It's obviously not Romana or the Rani, and it would be just too convenient for the Doctor or the Master to be there. The Meddling Monk or War Chief sent into exile, perhaps?
Review By [matthew] • Date [25 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Dargos
Review:
Good story.

Okay, Xander risks his life for them and afterwards he is locked up for "political reasons".

In that case Xander should find a way to get out of ship and to a suitable planet.Colonials should fend for themselves.Next time they encounter vampires, that´s their problem.
Comments from author:
Xander understands the complexity of the situation, he just doesn't like it.
Review By [Dargos] • Date [25 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Elleria
Review:
So very much looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [13 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Infinix
Review:
This story has come quite a way, from a couple of ficlets barely more than drabbles to a full blown story that has a very nice epic more than it seems fell.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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