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Review of chapter "Best laid Plans" from RevDorothyL
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This is a really good start! I can't wait to see if Faith uses Saffron's original plan or some other variation to get close to River, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Nice work!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Best laid Plans" from Faleoh
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Very nice in all aspects. I can't wait for more!
Review By [Faleoh] • Date [7 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Best laid Plans" from grouchie
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i like how you have written faith. good job. i can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [grouchie] • Date [7 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Best laid Plans" from JDudeman
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Not bad, rather curious to see where you'll go from here. I was a little surprised Faith was willing to rip Mal off, though - I get that petty stuff wouldn't bug her, but I don't see her eagerly jumping into a life of crime in a strange universe...
Review By [JDudeman] • Date [6 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Best laid Plans" from Beneficia
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Oh cool! You answered my challenge!

Constructive criticism: There's a lot of exposition and background explanation in the first chapter; it seems to be just hurrying past important parts that maybe should be expanded and parsed out through later chapters. But then I'm 9 chapters into my own Buffy/Firefly crossover, and I still haven't explained one single thing about where/when/how/what Buffy was before she showed up on Serenity. And I probably won't for a while, so... nevermind.

I like the set up; you've got a good reason for Faith coming on board, and I know that Saffron's gonna come back and screw things up. That's something to look forward too ;) I am having a hard time picturing Faith as the meek damsel in distress; it's completely out of character for her, even acting the part. But then that could be an excellent aspect to approach this with. A lot of why Faith is the way she is, is because of how she grew up, and we know from season 3, that she was envious of Buffy, and wanted to have that kind of life, maybe be that kind of person. Having to act out this part might be a way for her to examine her attitude and personality, maybe she'll find out she likes being the person she pretends to be more than she likes the 'real' her. The more I think about this, the more interesting things I see you could do with it.

I have to admit, the Faith/Mal pairing doesn't really work for me. But I know there are others who don't get Buffy/Mal, so it's cool.

I'm glad this plot bunny has found a home, even if it's not my favored pairing. Have fun with this, and I hope you get lots of good reviews :)

Beneficia
Review By [Beneficia] • Date [6 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Best laid Plans" from SamDragon
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Good start.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [6 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Best laid Plans" from Ddraig
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Ooo! I'm intrigued by what's going to happen next. And what happened to her to get her to the future. I'll be tracking his story. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [Ddraig] • Date [6 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Best laid Plans" from ForeverAndEver
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Totally engrossing. Can't wait to see where this goes next.
Review By [ForeverAndEver] • Date [6 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Best laid Plans" from AnnOfMidnight
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Nice. I like this idea-
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [6 Dec 06] • Not Rated
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