I don't review anything that much I am more of a Lurker than a Reviewer.
This is one of the better starts to a Story that I have read in a long time. I like that he does not have Iron Man armor that he is having to build from scratch.
Review By [Elric] • Date [7 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Xander has a great amount of inventive and unorthodox ideas and ways to deal with situations and enemies.......i can see him creathing things what even Tony Stark wouldn't have thought......hmm...the CRD lab factory was abandoned after the Demon Boyfriend mess with Will, no?
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [7 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I particularly liked that Xan hasn't started out with super-tech and is having to, effectively, re-invent the wheel, including equipment failure when you most want it to work.
Review By [Jewel] • Date [7 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Interesting! A few points; 1) Although the tuxedo was "bought from a Good Will store in Los Angeles a week earlier," I assume it was *Ethan* who bought it since it was cursed. 2) While it wouldn't be nice to reveal Tony Stark's big secret, telling the others that he helped design the original Iron Man armor should be okay. 3) And Xander *should* tell the others about *his* armor, if only so Willow can help him with the design and Buffy with the testing. 4) Hopefully, Xander won't have picked up any of Tony's less savoury character traits (with his family background, alcoholism is a real risk). 5) Although acquiring some of his financial accumen could be very helpful. (Would the Stark patents on the *original* IM tech still be in force?)
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [7 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]