Pretty nice story you have here. I look forward to reading more of it. Hope to see more and keep up the good work.

Making with the big huh? when was buffy supposed to have died? and how? Kendra got hit with the pipe and then later fell through a portal, buffy got thrown into Xanders arms and then taken home by angel after he lost track of Xander but wheere is buffy's death? As for kendra in Plyea, your times don't seem to mach up very well with how much time has passed, is this dimentional variance?

Story's still good but you still need to up the detail level.

Buffy didn't die, Ford did, and yes the times in Pylea and earth run a bit differently.

Looking forward to the next bit.

I hope you enjoyed it.

-Tjin

This is one terrific story. I am so glad you are updating so quickly. I hope you can continue this terrific crossover of BtVS and the Marvelverse as I like the way almost all Our Heroes, even Angel!, are upgrading themselves. I also like seeing that Cordy also kicking some demonic ass. Too bad she can't leave the a**hole inside the snake. He'd better let Cordy drive after all that. Lol!

yeah, the ripple effect is starting to build, i'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.

- Tjin

good work

Glad you liked it.

- Tjin

Cracking good update, I especially liked the Cordelia section.

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed this story.

- Tjin

Whoa, did Willow just create a variant of the Witchblade?

I Don't know... did she?

- Tjin

Great chapter. Love the little updates for all the characters. Keep up the good work.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

- Tjin

Glad to finally see an update. Alot happened in that chapter and it sped up or I've been reading slow stories just before this one. More please!

i am trying to get the speed up a little bit, thanks.

While I've got to say your chapter legnth is irritating and it's noticable you don't go for the funny I can honestly say I love the story. It's rather vague on a few things I think you could have expanded on but I'd say the story'd beat out Iron Tauri easily if you'd expand it a little.

And this comes from a honest fan and critic of said story.

Many thanks for NOT killing of kendra though. Out of curiosity though, while angst is annoying and somewhat difficult to write, is it just me or is Xander not really that torn up about kendras ''death''?

Xander is actually torn up, but he is slipping into Tony Stark's method of dealing (WEll not the drinking thankfully.) he is overworking himself so that he doesn't have to 'Feel'

as for the funny... it just didn't seem to fit this story very well.

thanks for the review, i will be working on this soon.

"Kendra took a moment to grab a handy rock from nearby and advanced, "

Really needs to learn to think.

She is thinking... she is thinking about pounding the crap out of whoever kidnapped her.

Interesting new chapter. I wonder why I get the funny feeling that the Titans plan will have some unforeseen effects.

::Gives the plot bunny a a slice of Gugelhupf::

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Looking forward to the next bit.

Great update. I look forward to the next update.

Enjoyed the new update.
Glad to see Kendra and hopefully her development as a character. I always feel that killing her in most fanfics is a copout, when they could always have three Slayers and one that is almost an original character to develop.