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Review of chapter "Chapter III" from LFW
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I am amused to find this short and yet it seems long and it makes me think about the characters actions.
Good writing in less words.
Hoping for more
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from eriktheviking
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A great Xander showing the influences of Bester.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from Genuka
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Can I just say? Damn. Mental preconditioning pre-death. That is one way to keep the vamp pop under control.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from Ghostrider
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Great to see another chapter!

So, Xander is building his own version of Psi-Corp. Not to mention picking up quite a few enemies he'll have to deal with. Guess he can classify W&H as First Ones like the Vorlons and act accordingly.

I do hope we'll see more of this and your other stories.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Runewolf
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Just came across this. Very intriguing.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from lorwen
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great start...
hope more comes :)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from FireWolfe
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I like it and I loved Bester he was not evil just massively misguided. Anyway great fic.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [2 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Sandi
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Very scary. Willow or Buffy would have to be the girl Bester loves or it could get very ugly real fast. I'd love to read more of this.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [8 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from TheaZara
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Being a Spike fan I tend to loath the Halloween rewrites that off Spike. That being said... that was like the best death ever. So very creepy and totally Bester. Willow was right... he is one of the best villains out there, totally underrated in my opinion. You did a kick ass job at characterizations and I could just SEE Bester/Xander in my head with all the mannerisms and that not quit smirk playing off their face.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it, i liked spike as a Villain, not a big fan once he 'Fell in Love' but i like that character from Halloween, killing him off was actually very hard for me here as i really wanted Dru to become obsessed and Spike running around trying to 'Rescue' her... that didn't work out and i decided that he would complicate any future writing i did in this little verse (He's very good at that.), so i had to kill him off and if he's gonna die, it can't be a mistake or accident... he has to die at the hands of someone... 'Worthy'

Hopefully i made it a death he could have respected...

-Tjin
Review By [TheaZara] • Date [28 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Dragonelf
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I have just reread this story and I found it just as good as the last time I read it.

I hope that you one day will get inspired to write a sequel to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some chocolate carrot cookies::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [26 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from LFW
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Yeah, Bester was a decent bad guy
Nice fic; makes me wonder how much Xander could affect the Mayor and Glory?
Thanks
God pic too
Review By [LFW] • Date [26 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Obsidian
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I like it. now this story would be great as a longer story.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TonyTheJew
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Love the story but please add more to this story ever if it is more about what happened Halloween night
Review By [TonyTheJew] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from LFW
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Glad you added chapter 2; a nice icing on the cake
It would be interesting to read what Bester could do to Adam of even the Glory/Ben situation and I dare say that Faith would not be chocking Xander this time
Good story
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from purrfus
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Wonderful mingling of the desires and personalities.

Loved Dru, and would definitely like to see what happens between a telepathic 'dark kitten' and a physic vampire.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [21 May 07] • Not Rated
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