Review of chapter "Part One" from lucyferr
Sunlight was already trickling into the room when Ronon woke with a groan. That woman was a devil, he thought and then the rest of the night came rushing back to him. The scars on her back and, oh gods, the way she looked at him, her eyes filled with hope suppressed so hard it was barely there. He’d returned the look and seen himself in her.
“How long are the days on your home world?”
should he not also determine how long are the hours? Not all worlds rotate on their own axis the same way
The glare he received in return was enough to fry a lesser man where he stood. “She’s been running from the Wraith for longer than I have.”
At that everyone straightened. Longer than… Ronon had stayed out of their grasp for more than seven years.
i can almost see them saying whoa
From what little Ronon had let slip, he imagined her to be about six feet tall, more male than female, grumpy, quick with the trigger finger and not what was generally considered friendly company....a blonde slip of a woman landing directly in front of Sheppard, who stared stupidly. Ronon’s friend was short, long haired, green eyed and absolutely stunning in a distant kind of way.
this is a great story - love the idea
“They removed the Tracker.”
Her stance faltered for a second and there was a flicker of something behind her cold green eyes, so brief it took John a moment to recognize it. Hope. He couldn’t imagine what it felt like to have something you fought for, for years upon years, drop into your lap suddenly, without warning. He guessed it was too good to be true.
you describe well
Comments from author:
Thanks for all those reviews. I'm glad you like the story.
Review By [lucyferr
] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from Lilkitsu
What a lot of fun! Kinda short, but still, great read. I could probably nit-pick a canon detail or two, but this is fanfiction, so screw it. I think the "slayer incident" was exactly how Buffy would have handled it. WOuld have probably enjoyed more descriptions of her and or Ronon ripping through the wraith, but still, lots of fun.
Review By [Lilkitsu
] • Date [21 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four" from spk
Just re-read this amazing story! Fell in love all over again with the idea of a Buffy/Ronon pairing. :)
Review By [spk
] • Date [24 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four" from NeedlessNoodles
How about not enough moderately happy/content Ronon moments. That's one man with the physic and voice of a man-god. Stories where he's still himself yet has someone to be with give me the tingles. Like this one with Ronon/Dawn; it was nice.
Review By [NeedlessNoodles
] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four" from Xayian
Nice. Not too sudden, a bit too short, and not as messy as you may think. :) I enjoyed the read.
Review By [Xayian
] • Date [22 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from eliseth
this is a wonderful story.
I like the unusual and paring. I hope that you'll one day continue this story, it's simply to good to just end it.
I really like the way you write and how you portray the different characters.
Keep it up girl! :)
Review By [eliseth
] • Date [3 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four" from nightshadowlife
I really loved this story!!! I would love to see more of it!!!! hehe too short!
Review By [nightshadowlife
] • Date [24 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four" from GypsyDruid
i really like that.
Review By [GypsyDruid
] • Date [9 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four" from SpacedCadet
very Very VERY good!
Review By [SpacedCadet
] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from Hawkehunt
Review By [Hawkehunt
] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from stargatealway
that was an awsome story. one of the best " dropped in the middle of nowhere" stories i have read. buffy and ronan togather is just great. they are so different and yet so alike. they would make an awsome couple. this was a great story. now i will see what else ou have written.
Review By [stargatealway
] • Date [30 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four" from RippersGirl
Very interesting story!
Review By [RippersGirl
] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from versblanc
You know what? I have never seen Stargate: Atlantis so I have absolutely no idea who the Stargate characters and their villains are. That being said, the way you write the characters and interweave the Slayer is exemplary because I got enough of a gist that I am able to seriously enjoy the story. Of course, I wished it was more lengthy so I could have more of a background on the Slayer's imprisonment, escape, and travels while running from the enemy. If you should decide to expand on the story considerably, I would be first in line to read it!
Review By [versblanc
] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four" from Amai
Too nothing. absolutely brilliant. Thanks for sharing
Review By [Amai
] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from shellc
I absolutely love this story. One of my favorite pairings that isn't covered enough.
Review By [shellc
] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Not Rated