Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Duke
Love it and hope that you update soon
Review By [Duke
] • Date [26 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from purrfus
Lots of interesting ideas; some I have seen before and some not, but I've only been reading fan fic for 3 months so I have a lot of catching up to do. I think a story it is not about the idea it is about how the idea(s) and the characters are handled.
Some of the wizarding stuff felt a little rushed but not too much. I think I am okay with it because I don't like Dumbledore, and I am not terribly fond of either Hermione or Ron most of the time. Watching the movies it is some times easy to forget JKR didn't always write either character as the most upstandingly moral and or mature person, even considering their respective ages.
I really like the creative imagining Halloween fics bring out in some authors. However, even admitting that I a little uneasy about Harry as Green Lantern, the Key, and a wizard, but after thinking about it a bit decided not to worry. JKR seemed to talk up Harry's abilities and had him doing things experienced, adult (generally expected to have more power / strength and control) wizards couldn't accomplish. Considering that a) you broke his wand, b) he is in hiding, and c) the Key's power is pretty much hypothetical (can't wait to see what you do with it), I decided to wait and see what happens.
Not sure about James as a mentor, and some explanation as to Harry's dislike of Buffy would be good. Recommend you slow down just a little, but you do have some truly wonderful scenes with Xander and Cordy.
Review By [purrfus
] • Date [26 Dec 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MistofRainbows
I got to the part about his family selling him down the river and quit reading. It breaks the characters in so many ways it's not even funny. I did read slightly past just to see if it was a bad dream or something. Sadly that wasn't the case. I think the story would have been better had his family stood up for him and it not helped. I see the story as being flawed because of the truth potion. They would have forced him to say what happened. It wasn't his fault and that would have came out. His family wouldn't turn on him like that, even Ron wouldn't testify against him. You skipped time anyways what was the big deal with having him be convicted anyways but his friends not screwing their character over for your start? I don't mean this as a flame, just pointing out the issues I saw with it.
Review By [MistofRainbows
] • Date [26 Dec 06] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Kaien
This is great. I like how this story is going, and I really love the Cordelia taunting. Can't wait to see more. Thanks!
Review By [Kaien
] • Date [25 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CPTSkip
I am enjoying your totally wacked out story. I hope you continue to update as I really look forward to seeing Harry kick everybodies' asses. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [25 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from djhardim
Interesting. I think I would have gone with the Golden Age Green Lantern Alan Scott though.
Review By [djhardim
] • Date [25 Dec 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Thedruid
Not bad, even with overdoing some of the charcters. But then Rowlings tends to ovedo charcters as well so it's not that much of a big deal. My major criticism however is that your severly overpowering Harry. Haveing his 'magic' changed a bit (maybe he can do wandless and silent magic now) alone would make him very powerful. Or even some sort of Green Latern powers. But to do both and then add The Key on top of it all? Not many can really do a good crative story when one charcter is so much more poweful than others. Heck, is Harry going become Ion at some point now?
Review By [Thedruid
] • Date [25 Dec 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]