And I so WANTED a second chapter....sigh....the suspense builds and I continue to want the next chapter...I await with baited breath, or if you prefer chocolate rewards
Review By [morgyair] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I think John and Buffy as a couple are good, even though I do prefer Buffy/Dean. I'm wondering now if you're planning a twist later on, where Buffy ends up with Dean. She's the reincarnation of Mary, not actually Mary herself, so it could work.
Review By [BuffyWinchester] • Date [29 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Off to an interesting and hopefully long story following beginning. The Christmas scene triggering the memories was a nice thing.
If you want to add the pic in the story, let me know and I'll toss it in for you... :-)
Hope to see more soon!
Comments from author:
Oh I would love if you could do that, the pic was my main inspiration. Thanks for the review and I'm glad you like it, I'll add another chapter within the next couple of days.
Review By [KaylaShay] • Date [29 Dec 06] • Not Rated
*tackles Krystal* Buffy/John! Buffy/John! Buffy/John! If I don't write that enough this story may disappear and then I'll be lost 'cause...Buffy/John!
...You probably want something useful in this review, huh? Well I'll try but I make no promises. The fact that Buffy wants a special Christmas for the Scoobies is wonderfully in character and completely understandable. The moment between her and Dawn was nicely played out and Buffy's inner dialogue about being tiny was a hoot!
The flashes of memories were both sad and heart warming and Buffy wanting to go to Giles now that she's confused. Its a nice through back to earlier seasons when those two understood and cared for each other as if they were family.
*sigh* This makes me wanna start on a certain sequel but I have so many damn WIP's at the moment. No! I'm resisting. Resisting while squee'ing about your fantastic story. So...SQUEE!!! And one more Buffy/John!!!
Review By [Ava] • Date [28 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Love this! There aren't enough Buffy/John stories out there, not that I have anything against Buffy/Dean. It's just since Ava's story I've been hoping for more. I'm so curious to see whay happens next. What triggered the return of Buffy's memories? What will happen when she meets her family again? What are the Scoobies going to think? What will the Winchesters do? Great idea, looking forward to the next chapter. Glad you posted!
Review By [Catlimere] • Date [27 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Oh, I am DEFINITELY interested. I've really come to like the Buffy/Dean pairings, but there is just something about the idea of a Buffy/John pairing that just really pulls me into a story. I just feel like they can really fit together well. Great job with the seamless feel of Buffy's memories as they appear. With stories like this, it is very easy for it to feel choppy due to the flashbacks, but this chapter flowed really well. Can't wait to see what you do with this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [26 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]