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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dreamweaver
Review:
Oooo-Mmmmm-Gggggg.......Moneypenny's a vengance demon??!!!
Comments from author:
Actually it's M that's the demon...
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [1 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Will there be more? Please?
Comments from author:
Sorry, not any time soon - too many unfinished WIPs already.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [31 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! This one really sent me for a loop!

Holy @#$%! M is a vengeance demon?! Bond is Jenny's father?! Oh, Angelus is freakin' dust, man. Bloody brilliant, I'd give this an 11, if the site's rating system would let me (and I almost never rate stories)! And thanks for sharing this!
Comments from author:
[spinal tap] This goes up to 11 [/spinal tap]

Many thanks!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [31 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fooo
Review:
Wow! I didn't see that coming. The identity of Bond's progeny and that last line were a real -- thought good -- surprise.

Thanks.
Comments from author:
I quite liked the ending myself ;-)
Review By [Fooo] • Date [31 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
How can you stop? There has to be more.....in response to your response I look forward to when your muse strikes again...
Comments from author:
I don't want to write more right now; maybe another time.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [31 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from desartartt
Review:
great story, could be a wonderful prologue for a AU story about what happens when James gets to the Hellmouth
Comments from author:
I'm not planning on a sequel at the moment - not ruling it out completely, but it won't be soon.
Review By [desartartt] • Date [31 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Geyer
Review:
Lovely story. The details are well-done, the plot believable, and the ending both a surprise and a pleasure. Although, like other reviewers, I would enjoy a continuation if you ever feel inclined to write one, the story doesn't need it; it's perfect just as it is.
Comments from author:
I agree that it really doesn't need one - I may eventually do more with the idea, but it certainly won't be soon.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [31 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from unicornzvi
Review:
Great story. I loved M being a vengance demon and the Bond books being Bond's fictionalized version of events. Now You weren't really serious when you wrote 'The End' Right? You are planning to show Bond and Ripper meeting, right?

The Unicorn
Comments from author:
I'm serious for now - already got too many unfinished works in progress, so no plans to write more on this, at least for now.
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [31 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
M as a vengeance demon, and Bond as the father of Jenny Calendar? What an intriguing set-up. Angelus/Angel would've been in deep do-do, with even an old Bond added to the list of people out to kill him!
Comments from author:
Not necessarily - Bond might end up going after Giles instead of Angelus, or otherwise screw things up.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [31 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from feekh
Review:
Wicked, absolutely wicked. M as a vengeance demon. And what better place for her. Angelus is going to regret being turned big time. I have my money on Bond any day. Even the new one.
Comments from author:
As you say - it's the ideal place for her.
Review By [feekh] • Date [31 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Totally did not see that ending coming. I liked your rationalization of a real life Bond and his life in retirement. Will there be more to this story? I'd love to see what James thinks of the Hellmouth and the Scoobies.
Comments from author:
I don't think I want to write a sequel at present, maybe some time in the future.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [31 Dec 06] • Not Rated
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