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Review of chapter "Chapter One: Clearance" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Cool! Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
thankee much, and I'll update soonish!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Clearance" from littleoldme
Review:
This is hilarious! I love the way you're approaching this challenge. It's done in a way that seems subtle and believable- plus it got several chuckles out of me.
Comments from author:
*grin* Well, I think it's going to keep being funny just through circumstance, but it's also a bit dark, what with the whole Buffy feeling abandoned (and fairly so: they didn't know she left LA _seven years ago_.) Thanks and glad you're liking it!
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Clearance" from Worldmaker
Review:
Nice beginning. And well begun is half done.
Comments from author:
Especially so in this case where I don't expect it to be terribly long! Thanks, and glad it's starting up okay!
Review By [Worldmaker] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Clearance" from Valkyrie
Review:
I don't know... Aliens versus demons... I'd think that programmes involving either would have about the same level of clearance. Or, are you saying that it'd be slightly more okay for the public to find out about aliens than it would be if they found out about demons?
Comments from author:
I had two bits of reasoning. One was that the public would panic more about demons than aliens because they're _here_, it's more immediate. The second was that the president needs to be on the Council's good side more than it needs to be on SGC's. They work for him. Keeping information about the demons away from them isn't going to stop that. Keep info from the Council (or spread info they don't want spread), and they could cut ties and leave the government completely in the dark about what's going on in the underworld.

Plus the challenge said Buffy had higher clearance than Sam *grin*
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Clearance" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Okay, now we're well begun! I like the way you brought Buffy back to Sam's notice, and the way the SGC was left hanging, while it's decided if they can be cleared to know if Sam's presumably low-achieving little sister is alive or dead. Nice work!
Comments from author:
*grin* I liked it in part because it's so uncommon for them to be left out of the loop. Glad you're liking it:)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Clearance" from KnightWulf
Review:
it was good i liked it alot, wonder if buffy will be bitter and angry at sam and her dad and does she call dawn her sister to stop question or what.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it! And yeah, Buffy's not going to be on very good terms with Jacob and Sam to start with, but I'll let that come out in the next chapter or so! Thanks!
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Clearance" from spk
Review:
Heck of a way to find out about Buffy's mysterious past. You got to know it's killing Sam not to be able to investigate this more. Great job in making the premise believable. Can't wait to see this reunion. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm having fun with it. Glad you're enjoying! And the reunion is coming soon.
Review By [spk] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Clearance" from kiwi
Review:
interesting version so far. can't wait to see where you take this. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm not planning to make it huge, but hopefully it'll be a fun ride.
Review By [kiwi] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prelude: An Invitation" from RevDorothyL
Review:
You're just beginning to whet our appetites with this chapter -- I hope more will follow soon?
Comments from author:
Yup, the first real chapter is now up. I didn't want to post the teaser/prelude alone, but I also didn't want to make it just part of a chapter, so.... Yeah.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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