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Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This is pretty cool. Good job on having Buffy come across as completely vapid to the ouside world.
Comments from author:
*grin* Thanks. And yes, it _is_ just how she's coming across, I don't see her that way. Thank you for recognizing that *laugh*
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from Toniboo
Review:
hey i really like this it seems really good!!! i love the idea it has loads of potential! o and is there going to be any pairings? please update soon
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm really glad you like it! Nope, I'm afraid I have no plans to bring in pairings-- I'm not planning to take this very far into the future, and nobody's feeling very romantic right now. Sorry!
Review By [Toniboo] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prelude: An Invitation" from Marcel
Review:
This is weird. I seldom enjoy stories where everything is going on so quickly. "Hey, we're the slayers, you're SG1, let's all share secrets and be best pals". This story is actually believable - there is a plausible reason why the sharing is so sudden. Looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
I completely agree, actually. Especially when they spill the beans on first meeting with very little pressure. I just kinda stare and shake my head. So I'm trying to avoid that, though I admit that beans are being spilled. Glad you're liking it so far!
Review By [Marcel] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from kimbclar
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story. I love the idea of Sam and Buffy being estranged sisters. Look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! yeah, when I read the challenge, it really intrigued me.
Review By [kimbclar] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Nobody messes with the Slayer's 'family' even if she 'dislikes' her/him/them.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from SheWhoReads
Review:
Oh, you *so* can't end it there! I'm on the edge of my seat, here!

By which I mean to say, good story. Thank you for posting it!
Comments from author:
Sowwy! Update's up tho-- hope you continue to enjoy!
Review By [SheWhoReads] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from RyianaT
Review:
Ooh, I like this. I like it alot. I like how Buffy's in full form and how Sam (usually pretty much the one who knows everything) is completely clueless. I'm greatly interested in seeing how Buffy is Jacob's daughter and not Joyce's and how she ended up with Joyce. And seeing how they react when they realize what it is Buffy does and how wrong they were about the mental institution. Basically, I'm greatly interested in where this story goes. Your characterizations are excellent and your story line is intriguing and fast paced. I look forward to the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I figure, yeah, Sam's a genius in her field-- but this _so_ isn't her field *laugh* Poor Sam. The history (which was more or less chosen by the challenge) comes out more next chapter, so several of your wonderings will be put to rest then. Hope it lives up to expectation! And w00t-- this might be the first time ever I've written a story that could be described as fast-paced! *grin* I tend to meander. Thanks again and hope you continue to enjoy it!
Review By [RyianaT] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from Noclaf
Review:
mahahahaha! sg1 dose not know what it's in for!
Comments from author:
*grin* That they definitely don't.
Review By [Noclaf] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from KnightOwl
Review:
This is good so far. You've made me interested in seeing what is going on. I'm curious how Buffy has a sister and father we never knew about. I hope Giles gets to tell them everything about Buffy. I'm really interested in seeing how the story plays out. I hope you update soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Yeah, the whole family thing is totally non-canon, of course, but was part of the challenge, so in this reality Joyce was actually her aunt, but raised her as her daughter. Buffy knew, but always called her Mom and thought of her that way. Glad you're enjoying it!
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from Allyssiandra
Review:
Interesting idea.... but is this a typo? "Dr. Andrew Jackson"
Comments from author:
Yup, that's definitely a typo. It's been fixed. I suck a lot.
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from anipotter
Review:
This is very interesting. I wonder how the SGC will react to Buffy's powers???
Review By [anipotter] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from KnightWulf
Review:
cool she hit her father, thanks for the update loved it.
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from Thewander
Review:
Very nice, could see this happening
Review By [Thewander] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from JoeDineen
Review:
So All of Buffy's trust issues are being brought into play, though I am very surprised that the she was not briefed on the Tok'ra
Comments from author:
Oh, not _all_ of them, I'm sure, but the ones that come to mind:) I'm assuming that they worked fairly quickly and she was given an incomplete debriefing, just covering the essentials. Since Paul wasn't expecting any contact with the Tok'ra on this trip, he was leaving it for later. Especially since he knew Jacob Carter would be a sensitive topic.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Reunion" from Clandestine
Review:
It's a really interesting story and I can't wait to see what'll happen!
Comments from author:
thanks! glad you like it!
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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