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Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from RaeBear
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oh!! write more. I want to see Buffy make mincemeat of those Carters, ha!
Review By [RaeBear] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from TwoBlackDragons
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Evil Author\Muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a good story, so please stop being an Evil Author\Muse.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from serenityselena
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oh my .... you stopped when things were getting very interesting ...
hope you`ll continue the story pretty soon ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from FireWolfe
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More please. I really hate that all the Problem Child challenge stories are incomplete. It sad because most start out so well.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [21 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prelude: An Invitation" from FireWolfe
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More would be great any chance you will come back to this story one day?
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from aveave
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I hope you are going to continue writing this story because it is really good. I want to know what will happened!!
Review By [aveave] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from pensivegal
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Frankly, I liked it better when Buffy was just pissed. I mean why does she need permission from Dawn to write off the people that abandonned her. I don't think Buffy should be made to feel like she needs her little sisters' approval to be upset with people who betrayed her. I mean, the Carters deal with aliens from outspace, but there convinced Buffy's the wack-job, how is that fair?! lol! I really am engrossed in your story, if ya haven't guessed it by now, so I do hope you'll come back and update eventually because leaving this unfinished should be considered a crime.

P.S. Hope the next chapter turns the SG-1 crew on their asses, lol! Oh, and if I didn't make it clear before, what with all my ranting, I really love this fic!
Review By [pensivegal] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from TroyGuffey
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SG-1 is jumping to interesting conclusions.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [15 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from RippersGirl
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I'm really enjoying this story. I love how well you have Buffy's voice down. And I like the theories SG-1 are coming up with. I really hope this story hasn't been abandoned forever...
Review By [RippersGirl] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from Amai
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- - “They were once. Then they gave me away like everything else of my mother’s that they didn’t want. The China set went to Aunt Catherine, the oak desk went to Uncle Steven, and the toddler went to Aunt Joyce and Uncle Hank. I wasn’t theirs. I was her’s. And when she died, they gave me away with the rest of her stuff.” - -

I love this little bit. It's such a perfect little word/idea. But I'm not sure I understand why everyone wants her to just... get over it and embrace them? I mean, it's not exactly reasonable to expect to want a hug from the person who left you in a mental hospital. I also like that they're not accepting it. They're coming up with a perfectly working theory that's absolutely wrong, rather than just going... okay. vampires. which happens way to often.

Wishing that would be updated... ',:)
Review By [Amai] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from Bluejello
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Interesting! I can see Buffy and Sam butting heads on the Slayer explaination, hehe.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from Tempe
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They believe in ALIENS but can't believe in VAMPIRES? Wow so I'm really disliking the Carter's so far in this fic, but I hope things start to get better if only they will listen to Buffy. Anyway, I hope you decide to update this.
Review By [Tempe] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from Thedruid
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This story is going so well, I really hope you write more on it!
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [28 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from spring
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Awww come on! This was just starting to get extremely interesting in the theories on what is going on with Buffy. Please please please update this wonderful fic again soon
Review By [spring] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
interesting chapter. please continue.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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