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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jayesh
Review:
This story came out of the blue! :) ... Great fic overall loving the expanded universe :D
Comments from author:
Glad you're liking it so far. Plenty more to come
Review By [jayesh] • Date [28 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
After reading the summary I planning to pass on this because I had a bad flashback to the second season of Witchblade. But after reading a few reviews I decided to go for it. After this 1 chapter I am definitely going to read the rest and have put this on tracking.
Comments from author:
Firstly was it necessary to mention the second season of Witchblade (shudders), and secondly thanks for the positive review :-)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from CPTSkip
Review:
Again, much impressed with your dialog, I am. Loads of laughs and yet your characterization is quite well done. I still like the idea of opening the seal, dropping a tac nuke in, closing the seal, and running away laughing, but I'm sure you have a neat idea also. I look forward to more laughs and copious bloodletting. Two of my favorite things. Now if you could just throw in some hot sexual activities...
Comments from author:
Lots of humour and violence but no graphic sex scenes I'm afraid. I can write them but I was trying to keep the rating down below 21
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like how you begin to develop Illyria's limitations and weaknesses without going too heavy handed with the exposition... more to find out later.
Comments from author:
Thanks, that's an excellent assessment of what I was trying to do :-)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This is where it gets interesting to me, because new territory is starting. Not sure where you want to go with this, but finding your tale interesting and entertaining.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it so far, I've tried to be as original as possible and the story does develop at quite a pace from here
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from matthew
Review:
Liking the story, but there are some grammar issues. You often capitalize where you shouldn't (ex. crowbar, grenade launcher, slayer - unless being used as a form of address, video camera, etc)
Comments from author:
I've never incorrectly "capitalized" in my life... although as a Brit I may have inadvertantly capitalised (sorry couldn't resist it). I don't have a proof/beta reader and I'm awful at checking my own work.
Review By [matthew] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from arkeus
Review:
Edit: Oops, double posted, and i don't see a delete option. So a question: have you read "i am what i am" by m-mcgregor ? it's the same genre, and really, really good.
Comments from author:
Nope never read it. I'll give it a look
Review By [arkeus] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from arkeus
Review:
Connor always creeps me out, but this is good. It is always strange to see such an alliance between the angel and buffy crew, as they usually operates separately, except for some rare occasion.
Comments from author:
I always thought Connor suffered from wasted potential as a character, certainly the idea of having a "boy slayer" roughly the age of the real Potentials appealed in terms of character interaction.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Nice to see someone thinking BIG with one of these time redo stories, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
If you're going to change history don't tinker around the edges really get stuck in, that's my philosophy... glad you're enjoying it so far
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Wormbait
Review:
Absolutely awesome. I think that sums it up pretty well.

I love the action but I think you have really hit it dead on with the humour, especially with Giles and Wesley. Bit disapointed not to see more of Willow as she's my favourite but I love how you've portrayed Illyria and faith (my other favourites) makes up for it.

Can't wait for the next installment, well done.
Comments from author:
I'll be posting up five or six chapters a day so not long to wait. Willow gets plenty of time in the limelight as the Fic progresses incidentally.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [26 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from CPTSkip
Review:
Oh my freaking left bun! This is such a great story. And your characterization, while warped, is wonderful. I especially like your Faith, Wes, and Illyria. I've been laughing so hard as I read I haven't even been able to drink my Mt. Dew. You have written some terrific lines, but my favorite was: ‘I’ve seen this film’ Faith declared. ‘The chick with the best rack always dies first and with these two as the only alternatives I’m in trouble.’ Lol! I look forward to more of your terrific story.
Comments from author:
My motto for fanfiction is "Come for the action and bouts of obscenely graphic Violence, stay for the laughs" :-D
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from JennMarie
Review:
This is great! Loved Illyria's Crash Bandicoot line, and Faith's closing line of chapter five... 'definitely got vision' indeed!! I'm really enjoying this!
Comments from author:
Glad to hear you're enjoying it so far... it gets better
Review By [JennMarie] • Date [26 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from arkeus
Review:
This is "good", i just hope that Illirya won't turn traitor, and that you are going to do super!willow :-), as she will be needed for such a war.
Comments from author:
You'll see plenty of "Super" Willow in later chapters including a fairly epic Mage fight
Review By [arkeus] • Date [26 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)jedibuttercup
Review:
*snickering* You left out the explanation of just /how/ Illyria managed to regain enough power to go back and muck with the timeline to her satisfaction, but aside from that, this was a quite satisfying spin on a really irritating plot point in B:tVS Season 7.
Comments from author:
All will become clear... well most of it... as the story progresses ;-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)jedibuttercup] • Date [26 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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