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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bunney
Review:
This is a great start but it needs more so fet back here!! :)

later and love
bunney
Comments from author:
Thanks I have another chapter nearly ready to post and have outlines for a couple more but my muse is being somewhat un-cooperative at the moment but will keep going. Great to have feedback so thanks again
mac x
Review By [Bunney] • Date [21 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decision Time" from daviderl
Review:
Didn't expect the Hyperian, but it adds another layer to the story. Just wondering about the former tenants of the hotel, and if they know who are there now.

Looking forward to Ch 3.
Review By [daviderl] • Date [10 Apr 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from daviderl
Review:
So far so good. Got an interesting premise. I noticed Ch 1 was posted almost two months ago. I sure hope C2 is coming pretty soon!
Comments from author:
Hi Thankyou for your review. I promise ch 2 is on its way, had some problems with my computer - Grr! but all fixed now so on with the story soon.
mac x
Review By [daviderl] • Date [25 Mar 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Winchestergrl
Review:
This is a great start. I can't wait to see what happens. Please continue soon!
Review By [Winchestergrl] • Date [24 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Erica
Review:
Nice startup, I wonder how they will react when they find out that powersurge was little ole Willow.
Review By [Erica] • Date [30 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Snoopy
Review:
Great start! Can't wait for you to continue :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Snoopy] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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