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Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from serenityselena
Review:
things are not easy to understand but they are strong and they will manage to get through this...
can't wait for the next chapter ^_^


P.S. sorry about your computer problems... it must have been so frustrating....


I meant that things are not easy for them to understand - not me... sorry for making you think that I was confused about this chapter
Comments from author:
Things are not easy to understand? ACK! I'm sorry, I failed. The entire point of chapter 15 was to review the story.

Sigh.

I will try to do better.

Thanks for your review! It was very helpful and needed.

Edited to add: Thank you for clearing that up.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Misty
Review:
Oh my god! Windows 8 is that bad? You poor thing, I hope everything can got sorted out & thank you for another great chapter
Comments from author:
Win 8 is worse than bad!

Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [Misty] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Amberdrake
Review:
Well I'm glad you made it back and are continuing this compelling piece of work.
Comments from author:
So am I.

Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
wow sorry you have been having problems with your new computer. Glad you are still working on this and it didn't fall by the wayside. Darn I wanted Daniel to have a few more minutes with Buffy too. LOL still good and still looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Gosh, I want B/D to have more screen so much! But you know how it is when other characters decide to take over for a story for little bit. I know you have experienced a temporary hijacking by other characters. I just have to ride through it because almost always, the other characters have something important to say.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from kiwi
Review:
thanks for the lovely chapter!

i've heard so-so things about windows 8 as well.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review!

I am trying to lower my blood pressure so I'm not going to say anything about Windows 8.... I will not rant about win 8, I will not rant about win 8....

Hey! Thanks again for the review! The reviews kept me going!
Review By [kiwi] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from nightshadowlife
Review:
I can't wait to figure out who put the mojo on Buffy and is causing all of these problems!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Working on the story right now.

I had to break down and buy a new computer and Window's 8 and I simply don't agree.

Thank you for the review!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
was very reluctant to start this tale considering the start date. have been disappointed before when an excellent storyteller stops posting updates to a well told tale. very glad i started to read this fine tale. thank you.
Comments from author:
Well this was good timing! I am pretty frustrated with all my computer issues and was thinking since only a few people were reading it anyway....

BTW: I too look at the start dates and the looonnngg breaks between posting chapters.

Thanks for taking a chance on reading my story and thanks for the kick in the pants to quit feeling sorry for myself for the words I lost in the computer crash and write new ones.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
awesome. Short but sweet. I am very much looking forward to more. I am sorry to hear about your computer problems and can understand completely I love/hate computers. This makes me want to write more myself. Thank you please keep it up.
Comments from author:
YAY! I would do (almost) anything to see a few updates from you! Let me know if you want a cheerleader!

I love/hate computers myself. The computer makes it so people like me can write, but they are very frustrating when I have to rewrite a part right before it heads to the BETA!

Thanks for your encouragement and review!
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [28 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from serenityselena
Review:
it seems that Buffy is better...
looking forward to her conversation with Giles ^_^
Comments from author:
I, too, am looking forward to the conversation.

Thanks for your review, it truly helps keep things going.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I'm very glad you posted this chapter, even in shortened form! I feel almost as relieved as Daniel and Giles, now that Buffy seems to have actually turned the corner (and Giles has become aware of the 'Awful Truth' about Willow's apparent involvement in perpetuating Buffy's magical victimization).
Comments from author:
Thank you for your thoughts. 1) I wasn't sure if I should had posted the half-chapter and 2) I wasn't sure if that scene would work, especially since I lost the last half of it.

Thank you for your review.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Comments from author:
Thank you. That one word means a lot to me.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from nightshadowlife
Review:
Ooh Can't wait to see the next one!!!!
Comments from author:
I am sorry that the update was so small. If I can get the new(used) computer tonight then I can start on the next chapter Tuesday!

Thanks for the review. It really does help!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
awesome I hope you will keep this up and not stop. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I hope I can keep it up, too! Thank you for so much for your review.

I am very sad to hear about the evil computer virus wiping out some of your updates. You are one of my favorite writers and I look forward to each update. When I get the notice that one of your stories has been update, I wait to read it until I am home alone, just so I can savor it like a fine wine. The Gift of Family is still one of my all time favorites! It's like an old friend that I go back and read on a rainy afternoon.

So thanks for your review, but also thank you for your stories!
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Shadowman
Review:
A well done story. Different to the usual (Next Day. Sorry about that it was late when I wrote this. I meant unusual.) type but very interesting I hope we will see more from it soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. But I have ask how it is usual? I've gotten many comments about how it was unusual and I'm not sure how to take them.

Thank you very much for commenting and for your review!

Reply: Thank you, that is very sound advice.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from serenityselena
Review:
a really interesting story with intriguing twists...
eagerly awaiting to read more :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! It makes my day! I hope I can keep your interest.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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