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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from gigi
Review:
Please update soon. This is interesting.
Comments from author:
Hey, thanks! reviews are my life blood!
Review By [gigi] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from zafaran
Review:
More, more, more, please. Hasn't *any* one considered that this is a Slayer Dream? It's not mentioned in the story anywhere I noticed whether they have or not, and it's a plot point you need to consider covering as a yes/no since it leaves you a plot hole since it was very firmly established in canon that she gets the prophetic Slayer dreams. If they haven't considered that it's possibly a Slayer dream, then they are drugging and electro-shocking her when the dream is *not* going to stop until steps are taken to deal with the dream's content. Other than that, nicely done so far, and I'm eagerly looking forward to the upcoming chapters. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
Yes, Slayer dream was the first thing they thought about however Buffy thinks that its in a military bunker complex thus they assume its from the Initiative. Since I picked up the story a week into the "dreams" I thought I could get away without spelling things out that the scoobs had already thought of it and discounted it. I'll have Giles say something in the next chapter to cover the bases.

Real life has been a bear and with my L.D.s its hard to write on just one story. I normally end up writing a few pages on different stories each week and that's why they are updated all at once.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [zafaran] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Javian
Review:
Very intriguing & full of emotion. Forge on. :)
Review By [Javian] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from NeilDingley
Review:
Love it so far, am I right in thinking Buffy's Dream features evil gould controlled Buffy and co. (you mentioned her friends eyes "Flashed" when the died? like a goulds), Oh and as it after the Ori is Vala still trying to seduce Daniel or is he free to comfort Buffy.
Review By [NeilDingley] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from WittyNinja
Review:
I'm completely intrigued and I have no idea where you're taking this and I love that. Please update soon.
Review By [WittyNinja] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from spk
Review:
Great update. Can't forgive you for the cliffie until we have the next chapter. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Well now that you've left that evil cliffy, you simply must update soon!!! lol. Great update! Can'w wait to read the next chapter!
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from manic
Review:
Wow, you paint a desperate picture. I hope they come up with a plan of action soon. Like call Jack! I like how you've included Daniel, and wonder who will find whom first.
Review By [manic] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from manic
Review:
Wow, this is really good. And creepy. Poor Buffy, It's terrible she's just wasting away. I greatly look forward to reading more.
Review By [manic] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from wizdmgoddes
Review:
totally sad. more please?
Review By [wizdmgoddes] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
ACK. Gotta save Buffy and sounds like they gotta call the SGC to do it. Then it kinda sounds like they might be able to save the SGC with her slayer dream. Now that is like Serendipitous or something. I am looking forward to more.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [24 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Javian
Review:
Wow. Freaky. Definitely looking forward to more.
Review By [Javian] • Date [26 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from spk
Review:
God...my heart is breaking for Buffy and her emotional turmoil over this dream. Can't wait to see how SGC gets involved. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
Ooohhh, this is really good sweetie! I’ll give you a more detailed review once I get home and off work. Until then fantastic job!

BTW: Of course you can use one of the images for your Buffy/Daniel group and send me the link so I can join!
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from KnightOwl
Review:
I'm happy to see a new part. I like that Giles still think of Buffy as the most important thing in his life. It might not be smart to have he and Buffy together, but I'm glad he followed his heart. I always like the relationship between Buffy and Giles.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [23 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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