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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Xocoatldreams
Review:
Okay, that was cute. There really should be more of it. Just a few little glitches that a beta could fix for you. One sorta major one is that Spike asks how they're going to get to NY, but Xander hadn't mentioned it yet.
Otherwise, don't leave it there!
Review By [Xocoatldreams] • Date [2 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from neverwill
Review:
Good story, will you be writing follow ups? I'd love to see the girls coming across the frogs, etc. Let's see their perfect lives without Xander & Spike around come to a screeching halt. You know, without the money to HIRE someone to fix all those things that get broken in the fighting. Without having another heavy hitter as backup for the nasties. No one to break up the gloom & doom of everyday living on the hellmouth.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [2 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Worth continuing or expanding. Though you might want to change the name of the story.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Not bad for a first story. I thought you were a bit harsh on B and W, but it is your story. And you made me laugh out loud several times with the road trip. I hope there is more to this story as it is such a great setup for more funny adventures with the lads.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from hilarydilarydoc
Review:
This was a lot of fun, too bad it appears to be a one-off. I think Spike and Xander could have a lot of fun together dealing with New York's "nightlife" and maybe adding a vampire & demon disposal division to the Ghostbusters.
Review By [hilarydilarydoc] • Date [2 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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