Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from Ailsam
What an amazing story!!! I haven't read any of the Dark Hunter books but after reading this want to go and buy all he books right now! Loved the relationship between Connor, Vi and Dawn; it felt really natural and was also very amusing at times. Just loved this whole story! Please, please , please update this story.
Anyway, I am now going to look you up in authors to see if all your stories are this good!! (and yes I am hoping that flattery will bring me an update - but I'm serious at the same time!)
Review By [Ailsam
] • Date [19 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from slayerslittlesis
Please please please add another chapter. This story is amazing......
Review By [slayerslittlesis
] • Date [26 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from teddybear
Please update. It would be really nice to finish this story. I have many cookies! ;-)
Review By [teddybear
] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from AriaDragoncrest
I love this story. Please update.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest
] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from Traveler
Just found your story yesterday and read it through to the last posted chapter. This was the first time I have heard about the Dark Hunter series but your writing, without bogging down in explanations, filled in what I needed to know. Thanks for sharing with the readers and I hope you continue soon.
Review By [Traveler
] • Date [6 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from laoshi
I feel hamstrung by the restrictions on recommendations. It was a really tough decision for me which of your stories to recommend this month it was this or House’s Key but this one won out in the end. This story was my introduction to the Dark Hunter series. There’s always the possibility of having no idea what’s going on when you read a crossover without being familiar with one of the fandoms. A skillful writer can find ways around that and you’ve certainly found them. The only part of the chapter which was difficult in that regard was the restaurant scene. The first time I read the chapter most of the names of the dark hunters and there partners went completely over my head.
Willow invoking a Greco-Roman deity which then starts the transformation of Dawn into her previous self is just neat and is a nice way to get the two fandoms to converge. The whole Dawn’s eyes are green thing is really cool. Just to quibble shouldn’t Dawn’s original eye colour be blue instead of hazel.
I really like the idea of Dawn escaping the overprotective Scoobies to go to New Orleans. I also really enjoy the aspects of Dawn’s personality you choose to emphasize. You made me a big fan of nerdy Dawn, especially her being all language geek. Her dreaming about her previous life is an interesting development.
I flat out loved watching Dawn get apoplectic over Professor Alexander’s assumption she’s skiving off in his class. Dawn putting him in his place with her multiple version of her paper is so beyond awesome it’s not even funny and then her running into man shaped wall undercuts it wonderfully.
Speaking of Ash I’m fairly certain Acheron is one of the rivers in Hades. Not sure about the ending of Parthenopaeus but it’s very similar to Parthenon which translates to house of the virgin. You’re much more familiar with the Dark Hunters than me is that the correct interpretation of his name?
It’s the first chapter and I’m already wildly in favour of the Dawn/Ash paring the interaction between them in phenomenal. The burning question is what happened the first time Ash was shocked in the last thousand years?
The only quibble I have is one of my pet peeves is the phrase sister slayer so the line “Buffy dives between two of the three-horned demons and jumps to her feet between her sister and her slayer sister” just feels unwieldy and not up to the standards of the rest of the chapter.
Review By [laoshi
] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from MalificentTheEvilQue
I discovered your stuff about a year ago, maybe more, maybe less. And since then I've read this story at least ten times. This is also the reason I'm currently buying the entire Dark Hunter series lol. I've also stalked your site and I've checked out all your Rayne stories and I've read all of them, multiple times. In other words, you are fantastic. I love your stuff and I have for a long time. Thanks for writing
Review By [MalificentTheEvilQue
] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from AshDawnSoulmates
Please start updating this story again! I'm going crazy waiting for the next chapter and it's been forever!!!!
Review By [AshDawnSoulmates
] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from WinterBlu
I read this last week, loved it.
Didn't realize how well the 2 universes were crafted together until I was re-reading my DH books while I was sick. I was reading Night Pleasures (the first DH book). The DH's were talking about Ash being elsewhere, and I thought, oh, he's off with Dawn visiting her family. In the blurb at the end for the next book, Kat is mentioned and I thought back to the scene where Dawn realizes Kat is her daughter, and how sweet it was.
It wasn't until I put the book away that I realized that in my mind, your story fits into the DH universe as well as the rest of the series.
Thank you for a new favorite.
Review By [WinterBlu
] • Date [3 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from AonGealach
I really love this story and I hope you soon update it because it has been a year and I miss the new bits! You should pdate House's Key and In My Time Of Living too. I love how you portray Dawn and want to read more!!
Review By [AonGealach
] • Date [19 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from Almadynis
Updating? Please? Pretty please with cherries on top?
Review By [Almadynis
] • Date [25 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from buffyandspike
I'm keeping my fingers crossed that you will finish this, because I love it. I would hate to see it forgotten.
Review By [buffyandspike
] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from TheatricalBarrister
I just reread this story for the third time. It's definitely one of my favorites. This latest chapter is entertaining, but feels a bit different from the tone of the rest of the story -- with the little vignettes and all. I hope you are moved to work on this some more.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister
] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from starshinedown
This has been absolutely hysterical to read. When I first read the Dark Hunter books, I wondered in my head how Kenyon's world would blend with Whedon's, and I think you've done an excellent job of working the two very different mythologies together. And you stay just this side of too-ridiculous-to-believe by rendering the characters so well. I see that this hasn't been updated in many moons, but I do hope that we get to see what happens next.
Thanks for the great entertainment!
Review By [starshinedown
] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from Faeri
Ch.29 was awesome! I cant wait for the next parts to come out! Keep 'em coming!
I realy hope you're able to update soon!! ^_^
Review By [Faeri
] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]