Way to leave me with a cliffhanger and get me hooked on yet another one of your stories!!! I absolutely love how you write Dawn. I've never read any of the Dark-Hunter series but it looks like I'm going to have to now, which given the sheer number of books in my room is probably not the greatest idea but who cares. Also, thank you so much for giving me something to read at 3 in the morning while I procrastinate writing an english paper that is now due in 9 hours. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Okay...Now I've never read the Dark Hunter Series so I'm a little clueless on the cast of it. And yet I LOVED this tale! Dawn's brassness was awesome as was her passing out from hitting the 'human' wall. The cast sounds great so far and has me wondering if I should pick up any of this Dark Hunter Series stuff. If ever chapter after this one is as great as this you've hit gold with this tale. I do know that I'm hooked and hoping for more chapters really soon!

-J-

ok, i've never reviewed your stories before cos im usually really tired when im finished (at 2am to wake at 6) but this time i have to make comment. - love the main 3.
how the crap can you leave us with that kind of a cliffhanger!!!!??
you take 2 of my fave universes and combine them, with surprising good results - it flowed, made sense, did i mention it flowed?; then you leave a cliffie???
that is so mean!!! you said you had a couple chapters written so please post them!!!!

can't give you a 10 cos you made me scream in frustration.

I am so loving this story! I've read all of your firefly stories and I am so thrilled that you've started writing this. I hope you update again soon.
Katie

Love it. I just wish they had this button where you could click it and it would e-mail you when an update was put in. Anyways, please update soon.

Very good start. Please keep at this story. I like the crossover concept. Dawn's tirade both before and after the knockout is very funny. I was in the middle of answering the phone as I read it and almost chocked trying not to laugh.

I LOVE THIS STORY. :) Sorry, I got kind of excited there. I think its wonderful that you put Dawn in this one. All those over-protective males....and one super powerful key! I really hope you continue to write and I can't wait until Simi meets Dawn!

OMG. Bwahaha. I love it. It's about time Dawn was thrown into this universe instead of the other characters. I really, really, hope you update soon!

WOW..... I have to say I love this latest story.... However Now I have to go and by the Books..... I cant keep up with the books I read now.. lol.. Can't wait for the next chapter .. Kate

I have no idea what Dark Hunters are, but I had to read this because it was yours. I'm incredibly glad I did - damn, you can't write badly :)

Minus karma points for the cliffhanger though :D Please hurry up with the next chapter... and yea, don't forget your other stories.

please, please update. I love Ash and must see where this is going. Your smart-ass confident Dawn is so funny, I love it. update soon!

please please update soon. i want some more ash/dawn interaction!!! Pretty please

I'm sorry, but you are just not allowed to leave it there...I hate cliff hangers. As for the story, it's well written and it reads like you would expect the characters to behave

Love it!! Not usually too keen on Dawn stories but you have me hooked! Loved how she put Julian in his place and her reactions to Ash and the rest. Let me guess what he's seen, Dawn kicking butt? Keep up the good work! So what exactly did WIllow's spell do yo her?

Great chapter! Can't wait for more.