I just read your story and while I've never read the dark hunter series, which I will soon because of this story, I really loved it. The first chapter was funny and very well written. I hope you continue soon with the next chapter.
Review By [roazin] • Date [13 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Thank you for creating a fic set in the Dark-Hunter world, I love that series and most of the fics written never get completed or added to but you are known for long fics and at least keeping us posted with author notes about updates, so here's to hopeing you'll keep up the good work.
So whats Dawn doing with the Damons....for some reason i see them playing poker or dice on an ally floor...(dont ask me why i just do.)
Can't wait for an update .
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [13 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I would like to tell you that I love all of your stories and this one is the latest in the greatness that is you...not only do I love the book series and the show...but you portrayed all of the character very well...I hope you update soon...
>^.^<
Review By [hangmansgirl] • Date [13 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I think that this is such a great story idea! I love Sherrilyn Kenyon, I love the Dark-Hunter series, and I love Buffy and Dawn, so this is a great combination for me. Please keep up the wonderful work, and I hope to see a new chapter soon!!
Review By [katgurl] • Date [13 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I've enjoyed Kenyon's work, and I love your stories, so I was delighted to see this. Reading it was even better. The situation and the dialog are just great.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [13 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Never read the Dark Hunter books, but I'm really liking what I've read so far. Your beta needs to do a better read through, though. There were some typos and wrong word usage a few times (descent, instead of decent). Otherwise, I love it. I like the Dawn is more than she appears stories...
Review By [Sithspit] • Date [13 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
*snort* OK, not a pairing I would have ever imagined. But, I adore your Dawn and the lengths she went to show Julian he was being a jerk. I also love how she's not all that impressed with Ash (or at least unwilling to show it). I can't wait to see where this goes.
Review By [JoAnneStorm] • Date [13 Feb 07] • Not Rated
I LOVE love love Love this story! The Dark Hunter series is one of my favorites. I actually squealed when I found your story listed. Dawn was hilarious and loved her interaction with Ash and Julian. I like that there aren't loads of Scoobies in the story,(while they are there), the main story seems more focused on Dawn in New Orleans. Please continue this and update soon!
Review By [hollywoude] • Date [13 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]